holy crap that was depressing! now i am all sad like.

Aww. That's so sad. But very well written. Great job!

Aah! This story blew my mind!
Oh no!
And I DON'T even mean that as a pun!

that was so sad. and so good. it would be cool to have a sequel of rogers reaction...^-^

Oh wow. That was so sad! I thought it was april at first. that was good.

ohh, very nice. i think you did a great job. great last line, it was eerie. PROPS!

Ooh, I kinda sorta thought it was April till the end w/ the gun cuz April slit her wrists...beautifully done.

aw, that was sad. aw.

...Damn.

That last line especially...woah. Yeah. Kind of plays out to make Mimi the antihero, which is always very, very cool. (Not Mimi being an antihero; just having one in general.)

Very awesome. Terrific job. I think you conveyed her emotions perfectly.

short, yet good, love the angst... it's ok. you should make another one if you want