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Nuit Fleur
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
I feel this deserves a whole bookworth of pages, but all I can manage to say is that this is beautiful and it moved me to tears. Fantastic little work of art.
Giant Nickel
2009-09-01 . chapter 1
Beautiful.

I wish I had better words, I wish I could offer you a review worthy of such a great work, but all I can give is my praise and respect.

This is stunning piece.
Secret Symphony
2009-07-10 . chapter 1
Excellent. I think you really caught the characters. The song fit nicely too. It was sad, but not depressing, and you kept the characters movng forward, even becoming happy again. Too bad the movie didn't expand on that.
emethystiris
2008-09-11 . chapter 1
Wow. This story literally breaks my heart every time I read it. I’m genuinely pretty upset now! I should probably stop reading it, but it’s so profoundly beautiful that I don’t think I’ll bother.

Beautiful writing, too. It captures how angsty things can get it you really do consider what happens after the movie. I don't normally go for songfics, but the song you've used here works really well.

Hope to see some more work from you!

-emethystiris
MixtapeSingle
2007-12-27 . chapter 1
This story made me so sad. Maybe it was because I was listening to "Like you'll never see me again" by Alicia Keys and it was perfect.
Nevertheless, not too many authors choose to write about Ed and Winry at their death. It was nice to see that included. I also liked the touch about her writing a book. Pretty nice.
Aeralyse
2007-12-07 . chapter 1
Wow.. that was so good it ruined my day. (Don't worry- that's a good thing; plus, the day's pretty much over.)

I loved it. So angsty, especially since I love the EdxWin pairing. Thanks for posting it!
sasukefan8
2007-07-31 . chapter 1
omg that made me cry! That was such a great story! Its sad. But its great! I love it. I can't really think right now since Im sick and my train of thought gets lost when that happens.
KariKyrie
2007-02-27 . chapter 1
God, this one-shot was beautiful! It almost broke me in half here and there (the 'soundtrack' I had for it probably added to the feeling ('Missing You' by Jem) but there you go) and there was this smothering feeling in my chest that wouldn't go away.

This is one of the most bittersweet stories I've ever read/got choked-up about while reading, and if my damn account wouldn't have already reached 150 favourites (thus stopping me from adding more) I would fave it in the blink of an eye!
Zuppi
2007-02-06 . chapter 1
Eep... I think you broke me. This is an absolutely beautiful peice. The movie broken my heart and as much as what you've written breaks it further I can't help but love this. I'm glad both Ed and Winry moved on in your fic because I can't see either of them pining away. The fact that they never forgot each other is what really makes this fic for me. And the little epilogue? So sweet. I guess the love of EdWin never truly dies, eh?
queenofthedonuts
2007-01-12 . chapter 1
MADE ME CRY :[
but it was a good cry.
i like these happy ending stories.
Princess Lightina
2006-10-14 . chapter 1
Wonderful! Simply wonderful! While I enjoy all the angst that pours from the movie's ending it's good to know that someone out there knows it's possible for life to go on because life just has to. Wonderful job once again!

Eraya
aka Arashi
2006-10-06 . chapter 1
Nice! You've captured the emotions I had at the end of the movie! I hated it the first time I watched it (which indirectly inspired me to start writing FMA fics!). But the more I watch it the more I started to realize that Ed's actions at the end of the movie weren't really OOC... they were just stupid and spontaneous. 8D Oh well, at least we have the manga and fanfics!
Iridaceae
2006-10-01 . chapter 1
i loved it! it was so sweet and angsty at the same time. great work!
anonymous
2006-09-26 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I'm going to be wistful and smiling all day. Thank you.
D. M. Evans
2006-09-05 . chapter 1
this was so wonderfully sad and hopeful at the same time.
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