i like this story. i love it when people give royai a medieval setting, it works really well. please continue this story!

Nice sotry. Work on adding more details maybe in the paragraphs but it seems your spelling is fine because Kain Fuery always get spelled wrong no matter what. Good story but just could use something more. Not sure what.

Riza should slap Roy! Thats always fun!

Great story! I can't wait for more. Please don't make me and all the readers of this story wait a year! Update soon.

-Jenny

Love it so far. post soon ^-^

Total awesomeness- very cute!! Roy is such an adorable spaz and Riza is totally kick-** ^^ Write more soon, 'kay?

Rissy-chan

I like the plot and it's development. Great job. there's just the atmosphere of the whole story that gives it a very serious appearance or so. haha. Wonderful work. I'm looking forward to your next updates.

Erinn~

I am finding this very enjoyable. Keep up the great work.

Oh wow. I am loving this. Great job and I look forward to reading more.

I don't understand why this fanfic has only three reviews because it definitely gives us a different look on RoyAi. AU stories are great as long as the characters aren't OOC and as far as I've read Roy and the others were pretty much in character.

I hope you'd continues this story because it's different and adds a variety to the usual office love fanfics. Keep it up!

keep going!

hehe i really like this - please update soon

Wow. That was…different. I can’t even put my thoughts into words. I really, really, really love the story you have going here. I’m captivated. The plot is compelling and I look forward to the continuance of this story.