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| Dybdahl 2006-09-20 ch 37,  | abuseSo, first time I read this chapter I was sitting in the library. Crying my eyes out. |
| blackie 2006-09-19 ch 33, anon. | abuseI have been reading this story for ahile now and I have to say that the characters are really ooc. Also Cindy is the prototype of a mary sue. The whole story is overal a pain to read and so unbelieveble that it makes me laugh out hard |
| ilovemygelding 2006-09-19 ch 32, | abuseI'm actually *very* happy Cindy is pregnant. I love it!! Keep up the good work! |
| Dybdahl 2006-09-18 ch 30, | abuseIt will be a happy ending, right? And thank you very much, now I have that song stuck in my head. |
| most excellent 2006-09-17 ch 29, | abusei really loved how in chapter 29 you can see that flack and cindy are really good friends... why didn't they ever go out? |
| LaLa-036 2006-09-16 ch 27, | abuseI love this story! I just started reading and watching CSI: New York, and I have completely come to love Danny Messer. I especially like Danny/OC stories. In C&PC, I love Aiden and the Cindy/Don friendship, and the Cindy and Danny goodness! Update soon! |
| Dybdahl 2006-09-16 ch 27, | abuseSo, I just praised you a few chapters back, but I'm willing to do it again and again until...I'm to tired to find anything apropriate. Let's just say that I love the story more and more for each and every chapter and leave it at that. |
| Dybdahl 2006-09-16 ch 24, | abuseI love the development in the relationship and in Danny and Cindy. Reading this story is like watching them grow, and you've done it so brilliantly, merging the show with your own brain-goo into a fantastic, believable story about two people who's ment to be. |
| -Bradders- 2006-09-15 ch 1, | abusehey Smackay! heehe only had time to read 1st chpt bt its really good! unfortunately im gona hav to catch up on the tv series so i know who is who and what they look like good descriptions though i usually only watch the las vegas and miami see ya monday x |
| sarramaks 2006-09-14 ch 18, | abuseCool story! I like Cindy, she's not a Mary-Sue, and I think the 'voices' you use are pretty good. |
| Dybdahl 2006-09-10 ch 16, | abusei love this story. |
| ilovemygelding 2006-09-10 ch 13, | abuseO, I really like it! I enjoy this whole multiple chapters in a day :) Great job!! |
| ilovemygelding 2006-09-08 ch 9, | abuseI just read all the chapters, great story! I really like Cindy, he and Danny really play off each other well. Good job! |
| Dybdahl 2006-09-04 ch 5, | abusefreaky kid |
| Dybdahl 2006-08-25 ch 2, | abuseLove it. |