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JennCorinthos
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseOMG, OMG Danny is going to give Lindsay a heart attack... Loved this...

JENNIFER
Hooty-McBoon
2007-04-07
ch 1,
abuseHahah Elvis. Loved that last line.
xxBuffyfreakxx
2007-04-02
ch 1,
abuseAgain very nice. really liking it so far. :)
ReJo
2007-01-27
ch 1,
abuse“I think I’ll be the judge of when I’m being serious or not.”

Ah! Great line!
roswellwbfan
2006-11-26
ch 1,
abuseMan oh man do I love this part! Especially Elvis having to break them up, which I find hilarious.
FashionIsUgliness
2006-08-24
ch 1,
abuseLove these two stories, hope there is more to come
:) Sam
Mountiegirl
2006-08-23
ch 1,
abuseGreat sequel Sugah, loved it!!
dddynamite
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuseAw hehehe I loved it very awsomely writen!
wolfmyjic
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuseThat was very good. And funny

Loved:
“Danny,” Lindsay said, and she hated the way her voice trembled as she spoke, “we can’t do this.”

Danny stared at her. “Sure we can. I’ve paid. We’re good to go.”

and

"We haven't gotten to that part yet, kids."

buwahaha

~Wolfy~
Calie1
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuseThere both great. I can't wait to read the next one. It's so ridiculous and kind of OC which I don't usually like but it's to cute for me not to. I can actually picture Danny starting to sweat when Lindsay calling his bluff and her freaking out when they got up to Elvis. Ironically I had just heard Cannon in D when I was reading it.
The Little Corinthian
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuseMwha. I love Elvis. That was awesome. :0P You should continue with this series, see where it takes you :0P Great job!
Mrs. Fitzgerald
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuseThis is an interesting spin! I like it!
meadow567
2006-08-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseI read the first story, I thought it was good. This one is really good. I'm glad you wrote it.
chili-peppers
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuseOh wow! awesome chapter this is really god well done!
Trixie7
2006-08-21
ch 1,
abuseFantastic stories - just the right amount of humour and seriousness, would love to see a one shot of reactions when they get back to NY
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