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| JennCorinthos 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseOMG, OMG Danny is going to give Lindsay a heart attack... Loved this... JENNIFER |
| Hooty-McBoon 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseHahah Elvis. Loved that last line. |
| xxBuffyfreakxx 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abuseAgain very nice. really liking it so far. :) |
| ReJo 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuse“I think I’ll be the judge of when I’m being serious or not.” Ah! Great line! |
| roswellwbfan 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseMan oh man do I love this part! Especially Elvis having to break them up, which I find hilarious. |
| FashionIsUgliness 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseLove these two stories, hope there is more to come :) Sam |
| Mountiegirl 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat sequel Sugah, loved it!! |
| dddynamite 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseAw hehehe I loved it very awsomely writen! |
| wolfmyjic 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was very good. And funny Loved: “Danny,” Lindsay said, and she hated the way her voice trembled as she spoke, “we can’t do this.” Danny stared at her. “Sure we can. I’ve paid. We’re good to go.” and "We haven't gotten to that part yet, kids." buwahaha ~Wolfy~ |
| Calie1 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseThere both great. I can't wait to read the next one. It's so ridiculous and kind of OC which I don't usually like but it's to cute for me not to. I can actually picture Danny starting to sweat when Lindsay calling his bluff and her freaking out when they got up to Elvis. Ironically I had just heard Cannon in D when I was reading it. |
| The Little Corinthian 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseMwha. I love Elvis. That was awesome. :0P You should continue with this series, see where it takes you :0P Great job! |
| Mrs. Fitzgerald 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is an interesting spin! I like it! |
| meadow567 2006-08-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI read the first story, I thought it was good. This one is really good. I'm glad you wrote it. |
| chili-peppers 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! awesome chapter this is really god well done! |
| Trixie7 2006-08-21 ch 1, | abuseFantastic stories - just the right amount of humour and seriousness, would love to see a one shot of reactions when they get back to NY |