I can imagine how challenging that must have been. It's very good, too ;-)

That was a really interesting challenge to set yourself. I really like haiku (the few I've read, and sadly translated as I don't speak Japanese) and I think you pulled it off really well. The interaction between Severus and Hermione is really nice, too ^_^

! So beautiful! I love the grace of the poetry, and subtle symbolism.

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Now this is just lovely. I think you come by your name honestly.

:)

Very, very nice haiku series!

I like your poems. Though unique, I think the ideas can sometimes be portrayed more effectively through different writing styles.
I think a true Haiku is only one stanza though. From what I have studied that is the case.
Thanks for writing.

hey, wow, this poem was amazing! i absolutley loved it! awesome job!
do you think that you could drop by my story and give it a read and review? i'd really appreciate it if you did. =D

A very non-traditional subject for haiku...

and he kisses her... !I didn't even see that coming, well not so suddenly at least. This is so cool. I love haiku, and Snape of course.
Hermione and Snape are just so cute together!

this is so funny i love it. i would never have thought of something like this.“You’re quiet – must be my turn.”ha!

Ruby

Wonderfull! I never thought of Harry Potter in Haiku! Brilliantly solved, and the last Haiku - just superb. Congratulations. And I really hope we read again something from you.

Aw! That was really sweet!

that was really very clever (one no longer wonders at your pen-name) & very sweet.
Lovely! Made me go AW. *happysigh*
well done
lia

I loved it! Short, refreshing, and witty. I hope you write more--short or long. :-)

Talon