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Reviews For: The Fate of One

Lethe101
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abusePersonally I thought you were rushing through this and using half thoughts to explain it you may want to make your next chapters longer and more thought out
mew-mew-berri
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuseoh wow!! one of those sibling rivalires! lovely!! i like it!! i think its really kool! there are a few word mistakes but i cant complaine to much!! my story does to!! but you had so better post chapter two! lmao update soon!

~mew mew berri (aka: the one and only Mary!)
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