|Reviews for The Fate of One|
| Lethe101 8/22/06 . chapter 1
Personally I thought you were rushing through this and using half thoughts to explain it you may want to make your next chapters longer and more thought out
| mew-mew-berri 8/22/06 . chapter 1
oh wow! one of those sibling rivalires! lovely! i like it! i think its really kool! there are a few word mistakes but i cant complaine to much! my story does to! but you had so better post chapter two! lmao update soon!
mew mew berri (aka: the one and only Mary!)