Reviews for The Fate of One

Lethe101 2006-08-22 ch 1,	abusePersonally I thought you were rushing through this and using half thoughts to explain it you may want to make your next chapters longer and more thought out
mew-mew-berri 2006-08-22 ch 1,	abuseoh wow!! one of those sibling rivalires! lovely!! i like it!! i think its really kool! there are a few word mistakes but i cant complaine to much!! my story does to!! but you had so better post chapter two! lmao update soon! ~mew mew berri (aka: the one and only Mary!)