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| Avatargirl92 2008-02-06 ch 1,  | abuseOh my goodness. *blinks rapidly* Holy COW! *raises eyebrow* MOO. |
| cloudsdreams 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseIt's so sad that made me cry T_T And what else can I say about it except that even if it really lovely and really good ? It's a kind of happy and bad end. Happy end because, if I had understood what happened (and sorry if it's not that), the war is over ; and a (very) bad end because Katara died. Well, anyway, congratulations. Cloudsdreams P.S : forgive me if I made mistakes in my review but I don't speack English very well ^^' |
| JoeBob1379 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseOh yes, that was HORRIBLY depressing. But absolutely amazing. Actually, this is my first Avatar fanfic... I've always been a Harry Potter person, but I LOVE Avatar, and then I just discovered Avatar fanfic... so congrats, your story is officially my first experience with Avatar fanfiction : ) |
| taffy0823 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseSo... did she kill herself? Uh... |
| Tinuel 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseAhh! Totally not fair! ;-; I dont read unhappy endings. You tricked me! I've never been left unhappy by you! lol Still, one cannot die it was beautiful. The emotions were kept wonderfully, and I felt my insides cringing at the unhappiness :( Yes, thats a good thing xD I just dont like it - haha. While the dialog was beautiful, and yes - an explanation was needed..it was a bit long. I cant really see him slumbering through all that, you know? First her grasping his chin, tracing his scar, tracing his lips, and quiet a long explanation, and a kiss..and still he slept. It didn't feel right to me. I'd say, just a few of those lines would've gotten the point across :) Gr! I still feel so sad! ;-; Three days...he only had to wait for three days ;-; And he'll never understand why she left him.. *sigh* You cruel, cruel person. Yet I still follow thee ;) -Tinuel |
| Kitty East 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseI made a sound. A soft kind of sound. Like halfway between "Oh" and a whimper. So sad. ;_; |
| 12manytears 2007-01-03 ch 1, | abuseYour right, that was very depressing! But i still liked it. It was an overall good FanFic |
| Z Star The Hidden Dragon 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseYes, it was a little depressing, but too bittersweet and well written :) Another epic? I look forward to it. |
| Spleefmistress 2006-10-06 ch 1, | abuseSad but gorgeously written. I loved it. |
| CelticGoddess1986 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abuseOMG Wilderness that was so beautiful! I've always been in love with the HCA version of the Little Mermaid to. Much darker and angstier and real. Because no matter what we may want not every story has a happy ending (despite the many stories Walt Disney tells us.) But this was truely lovely, so are so talented wilderness, it's not fair! *pouts* Can I steal your talent for like a week, so that way I can like really impress my Creative Writing teacher? I'm waiting for more of your awsome-inity! Great Job! |
| Junsui Chikyuu 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseso sad! But so much in the tradition of the original Little Mermaid that it exudes the same feelings... Very nicely done! |
| Shadowed Dream 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abusewow! thats all i can say, wow |
| shikamaru roxs my soxs 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseO.o shikamaru's hot honey *^_^* |
| smartcheer917 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseomg she killed herself? that is effed up, but it still was a really good story. |
| Half-elf 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was sad but very beautiful. Tragic romance, the esence of so much literature. |