Wow. Totally had no idea who it was at the beginning! I would have never guessed Marty though. I loved that Marty got to witness the closeness of their relationship. He was always not a believer in Rory and Logan. The scene where Logan came home was so sweet. I loved the story. I tend to be a fan on stories that have different points of views on Rory and Logan, as long as they can see they are meant to be together!

This was cute. I wished there was more Rory and Logan cuteness but since it was Marty's PoV i guess that would have been difficult. Great story

Wonderful wonderful story. I always love stories that have people giving their perspective on Rory and Logan, especially when they can see how sweet and romantic their relationship is. This story was so cute with how sweet Logan was taking care of Rory. Loved it. Marty still seems bitter tho, he has always been kind of like a Dean to me, too boring and safe to truly make Rory happy. Unlike Logan who would give her the world, bring her out of her shell, be able to truly understand her, banter with her and yet be so sweet and give her things that money truly can't buy

Amazing fic.

I love reading and re-reading this wonderful story. It is a pity that you have not written more Logan and Rory stories. You are one of the best Rogan/Sophie writers!

That was really sweet, I think it was nice that you didn't make Marty unlikeable. And I loved the description of Rory when she was thinking about Logan. Very well done.

the good ones are always out of reach great job i loved the story i didnt even realise she was with marty until like the middle but im guessing that was your plan to keep us on our heals great job its really awsome trully realistic and such an awsome rogan so again great job i bet you could write a great lit to!so maybe write a lit ill be a great reviewer!

WOW,

Doesn't the low amount of reviews for oneshots suck?

'Cause really, this is a very good story, just thought you should know.

i feel like an idiot because it took me a bit to realize it was marty. very sweet.

Fantastic one shot...I love how we're seeing Marty's point of view on Rory and Logan's relationship.

i reviewed this in but i wanted to say that this is one of my favorite stories and its really great.

I reviewed to this on the other site but it's a great story and plus, who doesn't love reviews!

That was truly phenomenal. I always hated the fact that someone on the Gilmore Girls Crew didn't involve the Marty character more. But it seems as though you were able to capture his character perfectly despite limited exposure. I could actually see this happening on the show which for me signifies a truly great piece of fan fic. The only thing that I didn't like at first was your use of "you" but the time I got to the end I feel like it helped make the piece a good stand-alone. Because while I enjoyed reading the story I feel like it was just meant to capture a moment in time. So I guess I'll just hold my judgement on the second person approach to the story. All in all you did a great job and I hope to see more of your writing in the fall.

-Alicia