Great job! I really like the build up to then end, with all the underlying humor. The end part almost made me want to just jump up and down and clap my hands, as ridiculous as it sounds. The mood was really nice.

hahaha, that wife thing was so funny!

what i dont get it is there a nother chapter? -.-

'Your wife!" hahahaha- that was an awesome line.

hmm...what could Neji be thinking at that time?

Hehe. I like the ending, where Tenten seemed to care more about the plant's heathly-ness than she cared about Neji. It was funny.
I hope that you will have a good day!

great writing. i loved Tenten's 'declaration of love'

Damn right! Wives rule all! Mwahaha!

Another great one!

Keep it up!

-heart-

that's all.XP

Ah, they're both so unsuspecting.

HAHAHAHAHAHA. I was wondering how she would defeat him.

Now I totally understand.

XD Love it! So cute and discreet!


~Tsuki-chan ^_~-*

OMG I was so ** speechless I had to reread that sentence! Genius Tenten! LOVE IT XD

KSM

This story is cute!Kyah!Neji smiled!NEJIXTENTEN is just so awesome!!

cool

love it!