::please ingor my last post::

sweet an update

i do like this story being one of the few Carl based ones

i do think you could clean it up a bit

but all in all good

transfer from the old fourm hu?

all and all nice i do love the fact that this is one of the few carl based fics

so is this all for you or could we postible see more stories?

Ok I know everyone does it but . YOU HAVE A SKINNIE USE HIM AS YOU SHOULD! T'Phai is an asset in my eyes and his skills get so glossed over!

*Wraithy looks shocked, well as shocked a Ringwraith can!*

I mean he's smart fellow, he was a good damn colonel!

Good story

Why do you review your own stories about 15 times?

You're fanifcs are wwwaaayyyy CONFUSING! You use EXCLAMATION marks in unecessary sentences.

For Example...

He whispered," Rest well, Brandy!"

[Don't you mean "Rest well, Brandy."?]

You missy have to get your english right.

*Princess Saturn de Dosei*

Is it over? Aw man!

Ooo! Its over. WAHHH!

not bad but seemed sappy.

May have it be a Carl/Brandy pairing

It's suppose to be down not done.

Higgins: You like him don't ya author?"

Author: It's Sonar! Yes, you and Carl are my favorite characters

Higgins said," Really?"

Carl said," Hey brandy!"

! IIIIIIIIII""""""""""""""""""""MMMMMMMMMMM SSSOOOOOOO !

very nice

sweet