overall, a really great story but I will be honest and say that sometimes, it was a little hard to follow. there were places where it jumped so suddenly and there was little explanation for why scenes were cut like that and not described. conversations with more than two people sometimes got confusing as well when you didn't specify who was saying what. still, I'm also wanting the sequel to this. I would really like to see where this leads on. keep up the great writing!

great story, really enjoyed it

Very good story!Fun,imagination,action,...The show must go on !And,for once,a non-boring new character:Fliq!Great job!

I just read the part of the story you have up and was enjoying it so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Ooooh, the plot thickens. Very good, K. On the edge of me seat here. Can I rangle some special treatment and get the next few parts ;). Oh, well, it was worth a try...

Hey, K. I read it forwards this time... and y'know something? It's even better! Now all it need is... uh, another five parts pronto. I know you'll finished all your exams so get a move on. Can't wait to see how everyone else reacts to Fliq/Buffy... avante!

Ooh, cool! I can't wait for more!

very nice start, and somewhat romantic, seeing that only her "lover" could see her true form, keep writing up more chapters

very very good short

Whoa that was cool yet I confused is buffy in a new body?

ohh, more please!

Continue! This was so great.

I love it. Very interesting. But where's the rest?

Continue, i want to know what happens next so carry on please.

Don't stop there, I want to know what happens next!