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| Coco-Minu 2007-09-13 ch 1,  | abuseThis was great, especially the ending. Plus, Jordan being sexist. Men can't shoot better than women, and I know this from the simple fact every guy who goes to the same club as me is yet to outdo me. Scouts honour. Anyway, women can use guns! Stupid, loveable Jordan. Excellent job. |
| n5d25d90 2006-12-14 ch 1, | abuse^-^ You better not get her mad, Jordan. |
| Spellcaster Hikaru 2006-11-24 ch 1, | abuseXD Yes. All Eva has to do now to get him off his lazy but is to threaten him with one of his big guns! Great one shot! |
| crazyvegimab 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really cute story. It had a nice overall plot and good length. |
| Virtual Dragon of Oban 2006-09-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat funny love it |
| Sailor Star Super 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuselol. jordan better watch out next time he gets her mad. lol. you should write another one shot about his regret of teaching her how to shoot. hee hee. great job! |
| BunnyKitty4434 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was a cute/funny oneshot. Me likeys. Byes now. Smileys.~-^ |
| p3n-stroke 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuse...three words... THAT WAS AWSOME! XD poor jordan! |
| Mina the Mischevious 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseI like! ^_^ |
| Fushica 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuse*imagining Jordan's pillow being stuffed with guns; a grenade launcher for extra good measure* Nice chappie, keep it up. |
| Thiendrah 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseYes! Shooting things, my favorite hobby. I LIKE!! |