Very good question. Where IS Kitty? No Atonishing X-Men fanfic is complete without that little bundle of joy. So where was she? Why was she left out?
Just kidding, seriously I don't mind. I'm just obsessed with Kitty Pryde.
Good story.

Thank you for a well-written Scott. Poor Scott gets so abused by fan fiction writers. Why do so many insist on making him whiney and foppish. Yeah, Strong!Leader!(but still emo)Scott.

Fantastic. I like the placing of Xavier as 'the right thing to do' instead of benevolent genius. I liked the Jean moment.

I really do buy Emma actually preferring the X-life, which I'm not sure aligns with your view, I hope she can stay.

I really like this. Yer ol' pal, The Bud.

SHOW SCOTT COOL.

How could no one have reviewed this yet? With all the crap on this site that gets reviews, and this one true gem gets nothing...it's just completely ridiculous. Anyway...

Very Whedonesque...found myself laughing several places (especially at the end), and it tied in well with issue 15. Hope you'll keep doing these little "behind the scenes" stories that we don't see in the comics.