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| Krillin Fan 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuseWell, a little disturbing. But certainly a welcome relief from all those stories where Trunks all of a sudden decides he can't kill 18 and, lo and behold, starts a relationship with her. Right, he's just gonna forget the poeple she killed, including his friends and family, and she'll pretend he didn't just kill her brother. FAR FETCHED! This was good though. Kind weird when Trunks gives her a once over, though. |
| prosser783 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseCall me a sadictic bastard if you will, but that was seriously the best angst/gore story i've ever read. |
| Chrosis 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseYou earn applause. The Androids SERIOUSLY didn't get what they deserved. |
| Dude 2006-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseSome gore has never hurt anyone :) Great work, keep it up. |
| Crocodile 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseThe best M rated (non lemon) one-shot I have ever read. This captured something in myself that I want to do to the very man I hate more than anything or anyone. You, my friend, are a brilliant author. |