loved the las two chapters but did it have to end, it was getting good!

Love this story and i'm glad theres a happy ending.

i hope theres a Sequel to this story anyway

very well done. It was great the way Noah was really too busy thinking that his son would never get a girl friend because of being a freak. Great going! He never expected it!

good writing. Just enough details to help the readers really get into the story.

Thats a really cool name! I really liked this chapter it was so sweet

what a lovely name i wonder who picked it out. lol. you are right i was suprised. great chapter i love it and i love the story you did a great job brenda. now it is time for the alcazar story.

wow there is so many twists and turns and secret plans it is hard to understand sometimes but it is excellent and i cant believe there is only one chapter left. great job brenda

*hides behind chair*

I did it again, Sorry! Have I not read anything else?

Anyway I totally love this so far.

^_^
Rosalie

luv both chapters!

Ohh thats one clever twist, i hope you update soon!

this is my fourth review of this story in one night, i had to catch up. anyways i cant believe jesse is hurting kae by leaving her like that. although he is smart not to tell her why he is leaving but she is devastated. awesome chapter i cant wait for the last two they are the only ones i havent read before.

it was really charles jesse was talking to and not his dad but he calls charles dad? i hope noah doesnt hurt kae and jesses baby let alone kill her

great chapter i like how you wrote why it was called sanctuary awesome job keep writing cuz im still reviewing :D

i hope adam takes good care of kae and jesse and jesse doesnt get together with shal cuz kae would be mad good chapter pls pms

more interesting as I read. Good writing