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Tonks' Time-Turner
2009-10-28 . chapter 3
Oops, sorry, in that line I thought it said inconsiderate. Lol, I'm so dumb, my eyes are tricking me today, well, anyway, Hannah seems obsessive, which makes me laugh! Still loving it.
Tonks' Time-Turner
2009-10-28 . chapter 2
This line made me literally laugh out loud.
“Are you ready to go?” He is so considerate. His manners are absolutely impeccably polite.
It's pretty good, I like your style of writing, keep it in the same tense though. Also, spice up the story a bit, romance is good and all, but with action it makes things exciting! Keep writing.
Backbiter Reader
2009-03-07 . chapter 7
Great story! When are Hannah and Ernie, Susan and Justin going to get together
Junsui
2008-10-30 . chapter 7
Hey Abbie,
Sorry I haven't reviewed in ages. Sometimes in this story I can still see myself, and Cherry said about Hans and I that this is what happens when Hufflepuffs date and break up.
One question, isn't this 5th year? I thought the Death Eater attacks didn't start openly happening until the year after when everyone knew Voldemort was back. Or did I confuse myself?
Love you!
-Katie
HogwartsHoney
2008-09-22 . chapter 7
That's a bit intriguing! Anything to do with Hannah's mother? Mind you Sprout would have been more tactful, perhaps it was the witch. Either way loved this chapter, something a little different :)
ShadowedDark
2008-09-21 . chapter 7
Yes! Finally a chapter.
I love my hufflepuffs xD
You left us with a cliff hanger didn't you. I have a good idea what this means...
PixieSoldier
2008-07-30 . chapter 2
I really wish that you would update this soon! I love this story! If you're in the mood, to read a Ernie & Hannah fic, with a bit of a twist. I am currently writing one entitled; Picking Up the Pieces. It's set Post Hogwarts. Three years after the War.
PixieSoldier
2008-07-12 . chapter 5
Aww. Her first flower giving to her by Ernie how sweet. And we all know Ernie was totally flirting of love the banter between these two!
PixieSoldier
2008-07-12 . chapter 6
Aw. This chapter was very cute. I have felt scared of kissing guys as well so I can relate. Actually I have never kissed the two boyfriends I've had in the past. They have kissed me - mostly on the cheek, because I turn faster than Sirius Black running from Bellatrix - and I blush like an inferno.
Sorry I'm random
I love this story do continue. And yes my reviews are long and I can't wait to Justin and Susan. Hannah and Ernie get together.
PixieSoldier
2008-07-12 . chapter 1
Aww, this is cute. Hannah and Ernie belong together. At least that's what I always thought same for Susan and justin. I shall continue reading. And don't worry I always review every story I read, because I know how it feels to get like 3123 hits and no reviews. That's what's happening with my current fic that I'm writing called Fire and Ice -sighs- Anyway. Please update soon!
~ Sierra
HogwartsHoney
2008-07-11 . chapter 6
I was slightly confused to start there, but it all became clear in the end! Lovely chapter and good attention to detail at the start.
Miss Bree-tea.
2008-07-09 . chapter 6
I really liked this chapter, it gives some sort of depth of their earlier years. I think it's very understandable of Susan's concerns. Ahh, but they do say that chocolate makes everything better :p. Please update soon! :D!
Miss Bree-tea.
2008-06-23 . chapter 5
Seems that Ernie may like Hannah back. Stuttering, cute. Also, the whole bit with Hannah almost toppling off of her chair, nice. Anyway, love the story so far. Hope you do update soon! :D!
Miss Bree-tea.
2008-06-23 . chapter 4
Haha, Susan catching Hannah out. Susan interrogating. Such a Susan thing to do, as my impression has been that since beginning the story. Aww, Susan and Justin. Footsies, classic. The whole cherry kissing thing, cute. Lovely chapter. Please update soon! :D!
Miss Bree-tea.
2008-06-23 . chapter 3
Their relationship is quite cute. Especially with the whole Hannah watching Ernie scene.

"I think school shirts should be banned. Forever. He should never be allowed to wear a shirt again – it is now officially, by my law, a crime!"

That line is amazing, it made me laugh. And also, how he didn't let her go when she pushed him in the water. Again, Hannah's ramblings, loved it! Update soon! Please!
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