That was just so freakin cute! Great-job. (:

*Giggles*
I just realised they both had hooves =]
CUTE STORY!
Really well written =]

Oh it's beautiful. I love you so much. I'm the happiest cow in the world for having read this story. Much smiles and gushiness.

Oh . . . the stupid slow cow . . .! (cries)

Oh, wow. That was actually really great! I loved the story you added in. that made it really cute, yet passionate.

Man, Rin is one lucky girl... Aww... Your story was so sweet, I can't find any words to describe it... ^_^

So sweat Rin is such a lucky girl ! ^^

This is the first Furuba fic I've read, which suprises me in all honesty, because I'm usually quite keen to dive head on into fanfiction and I've been reading Furuab for ages.

Okay, so I loved it. Incredibly sweet.

'“I made it up myself,” Haru smirked'
Bizarrly, that's my favourite line...

Aw.. that's so sweet!

I'm watching the anime right now. Haru was just introduced. yay! Now I'm waiting for Rin. :)

Excellent short story!

aw...so beautiful story...love it.. TT

Awe, that was so cute! I love Rin and Haru together, especially in cutesy moments like that.

aw. no matter how many times i read this, i'll always love it! ^^

This is so perfect!! I love it!!

Aw... that was so cute. ^_^ Haru seemed to be a tad out of character with all of the laughing and smiling he did, but overall I thought it was great. Well done!

i dont see the humor in this story but it just might be mi blondness *thinks* but im not a blond (no offense to blonds) but i likey