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| Quill-32 2006-09-08 ch 1,  | abuseSo sweet! I love seeing Grissom wanting to make things right. Lovely moment at the end. |
| Ricker23 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was really cute! Loved that he wants to make things right with her. Look forward to more from you. :-) |
| xyber116 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseI can't really believe that the beard is really gone. I want it back. |
| geekluvinskater 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseVery cute story, I enjoyed reading it. I kinda giggled when you seperated the chapter with S because I first thought it was Z like snorring LOL. Anyway good job! |
| Lucy.writerchick 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseAw so sweet! Loved it! |
| Txxgrrrl 2006-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was adorable...I will now implant into my head that this is why the beard is gone. |
| Domo Arigato 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, fluff and dialogue. I'm so proud of you. There is still some kind of underlying sadness and intensity about the way you portray Grissom, though. I loved it. |
| Chey1386 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseCute! (Now Grissom just has to make up for all the countless other things! hehe) |
| windbound 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseCongratulations for successfully entering the "almost fluff" category! Keep on writing, you have a way with words girl:) |
| Midnight-Psychotics 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseAw! thats really all i have to say lol great story, heaps cute! |
| odeepblue 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseaw that was adorable ;) |
| bruceelton122@yahoo.com 2006-08-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this! I see that it is chapter 1, so I am hoping to read more chapters in the future. I would like Sara to be the reason he shaved. Great story! |