Reviews for We're the Band

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Daetor 2008-05-13 ch 27,	abuseOo, a new chapter, been long enough since you last updated. It's good to see a new one. Interesting way of depicting Asuka's father, the view on him is really torn around, some say he's an ** as bad as Gendo if not worse, some make him like you do and some turn him into an awkward father. Seeing that this is a WAFF fic, it was to be expected that Asuka's father would behave decently, right? So no complaint there. The Rei bits made me laugh, I always thought that because of how she was in the series, if changed a bit, Rei could be an endless well of humor. All in all, a good chapter that brings a little insight on how things are going, so good luck with your work and update as soon as you can.
Omega87 2008-05-13 ch 27,	abuseAwesome, another chapter =D. Sucks to hear about your ankle man, I hope you're doing well. This just goes to show you that sports are evil, and that you should spend less time tearing flags off the midregions of other sweaty men and more time writing for us =P. Anyway this one was good (of course). I feel for Shinji during that whole scene with Asuka's father, I would have felt more comfortable bringing Unit 01 with me to that meeting haha. All in all exactly what we've come to expect from a story with consistantly high standards, can't wait to see the next one.
pharitse 2008-03-23 ch 26,	abuseI loved what Asuka said, women are supposed to be mysterious. That was hilarious! I hope that there is a follow up story if this one is coming to an end. This is a fun story to read! I hope you had as much fun writing this as I had reading it.
Daetor 2008-03-12 ch 26,	abuseSo, another chapter has finally been posted. This story is good and thanks to youtube I was able to listen to all of the songs while reading it. The songs fir Shinji and the crew rather well in my opinion and I'm under the impression that the music industry wouldn't have fared too well anyway with the Second and Third Impacts. Keep going and I hope that either this story gets very long or that you're going to make follow-up stories. The thing is that you can end this story when the band itself isn't the main focus anymore and make another story afterwards to continue the time line. Whatever you do, this is a great story which is really worth reading so I hope that you'll consider it worth writing.
boznia 2008-03-11 ch 26,	abuseShinji and Asuka can barely stand to be apart for a day. That's closeness. So now they've got a solid plan to make some money. My, the group has come a long way. Good work.
Omega87 2008-03-11 ch 26,	abuseYay another chapter, with more good writing as usual. Only complaint I have is... I dunno if I missed it or not, but there didn't seem to be much description of the actual concert that Shinji went to do. Who knows though it is like 1 AM lol. Nice job dude, lookin' forward to the next one.
boznia 2008-01-09 ch 25,	abuseNice to see Yuki getting a bit of a spotlight, and Shinji and Asuka having their alone time. Good work.
Darth Deedlit 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseI meant that it seems original to me, since I'm new in the fanfiction stuff. I still have to finish it, I'm almost there, but I can see that you just love music and I sense that maybe you are open minded about it and that's good! About the first set of songs its funny how it starts with Van Halen and finish with Hoobastank. The story is way too romantic for my taste but I do enjoy the concert parts too much. Is not that I can't enjoy a little romance from time to time, but I think that it's more interesting if there are complications in the relationship. I actually would've loved to see Shinji fighting for Asuka's love, but thats just my opinion. I would also loved if you put less known songs, even if they are still very known bands. Like the first battle scene, you used The Unforgiven part one, but I think that Disposable Heroes from the same band fits better, that's just an example. It will be nice to see more of Pearl Jam, and maybe something of Led Zeppelin, Ramones and The Doors (that, by the way would've fit perfectly in the first set since they only played with drums, organ and a guitar, but that cannot change anymore, right?). Anyway, I do enjoy the story. Keep 'em coming!
Kragoth 2007-12-26 ch 25,	abuseThis story is still developing very nicely. I've been away for a while, but now that i read these latest chapters i was nicely pleased. Great.
Darth Deedlit 2007-12-26 ch 25,	abuseOK, I will be honest. I have not finished reding the story yet. But I will tell you this: This is very original, very fresh, I love it! I kinda did something like that on my story, not too much but a little. I love U2 and Metallica!
bigguy1234 2007-12-24 ch 25,	abuseawesome it was very good keep up the work hope to see the next chapter very soon till see ya
Omega87 2007-12-24 ch 25,	abuseWoot chapter time, right on Christmas Eve no less...gee that looks a little planned =P. This was a good chapter but it was a little short, but hey it's Xmas and you're probably not sitting on loads of time right? lol. I liked it anyway. Merry Christmas, Happy New Year, and cya at the next chapter.
Brian Bloomfield 2007-10-18 ch 24,	abuseI have to tell you that this is by far the best Evangelion story that I have ever read. Iam dissipointed in myself for not reading it sooner. Yu have taken the Eva characters and made them truely yours. In addition to that you've added new characters developed them beautifuly so far, although I would like to see more about Kensuke and his girl. I also want to see a performance by Shinji and the Philiharmonic. I LOVE THAT! Unfortunately I've never written an Eva story, although I may try my hand at it soon. If your interested you can look at my profile. You may enjoy my Sonic stories and the few other things I have done. Again, EXCELENT WORK!
Legato Deathscythe 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseOverall I like the fic. I do have problems with you using song lyrics in EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER. I'd personally start getting rid of extranious lyrics and not focus on trying to itegrate a song into each chapter. It takes away from the overall story in my opinion at times. I would say that in some cases you could simply refer to someone singing, like in the last chapter, it would have been more dramatically powerfull to ignore the words of whatever Asuka was singing, ad dedicate that space to a deep look into what he's thinking as she sings. Also, I'm not to big on the whole cover band thing. I'd say personally if you are good with that sort of thing, write your own songs, and then try to integrate them into the fic. This allows you to gain experience in writing in that form as well as dramatic writing. Those are my two cents. The Dark Lord LD
Omega87 2007-10-17 ch 24,	abuseWoo new chapter, but wait...Shinji's hair went blonde? I think I better go back and re-read the last chapter cause I think I missed something. Other than that the chapter was the usual good work :P, never heard that song before though. Those guys really need a new hobby besides following Asuka around with a camera haha. Cya at the next longer chapter =D

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