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| EdenEight 2002-01-29 ch 2, | abuseHEy hun your a real cutie with your stories great job :) Don't worry about changing emotions so fast, in my opinion as long as it's explained then or later on it's all good. |
| ColleenieG 2001-07-10 ch 2, | abuseWell, the grammar mistakes made the story difficult to comprehend at times, and I'm not sure if there was enough details for the story to really grab my attention, but, the storyline isn't too shabby. I'll check back when it's all done and posted. |
| Oki Shiratori 2001-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey I love your story its great......................... |
| AnimeStar 2001-06-11 ch 1, | abuseWell, its good so far. So...MAKE MORE FAST! |
| Jim's Girl 2001-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is really intreguing so far--I like your writing! I hope you will continue w/ this story! |
| Jade S 2001-06-10 ch 1, | abuseHey, this is pretty kewl so far! Poor Jimmy though, wonder what's up with him. Keep writing! I really like it!! |
| Sakura_Hell 2001-06-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the story! It's soooooooo cute. I can't wait to find out what happens next. ::grins evily:: ~Sakura |
| Anime Angel~^0^ 2001-06-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseaaaw...poor jimmy-kun. i hope he's okay! ^_^ keep going on this please! it's good so far! ~^0^ |
| hanmyo 2001-06-10 ch 1, anon. | abusewow that was so sweet ;.; Gene makes a good big brother^^ Great work keep it up |