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| Claire 2006-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! That was just ... if I say great or amazing I still won´t be able to express fully how I loved that! I think you did an amazing job in keeping them both in character, the "So you walked all the way down here, completely out of your way, and proceeded to wake me up at 3 o’clock in the morning just to tell me ‘Thank you’?" line? I could totally picture John saying that on the show ! Please write more of John/Liz :) |
| Nalana 2006-09-07 ch 1,  | abuseOKie, now that was just too sweet >.> I loved it! |
| Darkwing333 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseOh good good good. I have really wanted a scene like this to happen on the show. Anything, as long as it is a follow up to wha happened to Liz in the real world, but so far it is a big NADA! Er! But this story is GREAT! Love it so much!! :) |
| Maggie Sheppard 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abusePlease, please, please, oh pretty please add more chapters to this episode tag! I want to read more! Please give us more! That would have been bloody brilliant if this would have truly happened in the episode 'The Real World'! Please update soon with a chapter addition to this story soon! LOL! |
| Tinuviel Undomiel 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseAww so sweet, I loved it. |
| Alexandra Weir 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseaw... that is so cute... IF ONLY! LOL |
| Alipeeps 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was kinda sweet. The characterisation was quite good (though I'm not sure Sheppard would ever answer his door wearing only boxers - but the image is nice enough to imagine than I can ignore it for the sake of the story! *grin*). Your grammar needs a little bit of work here and there but overall that was a nice little tag and I adored the last line about how much he was willing to risk for her! :D |