Hm... this story seems to tell more then it seems... might just be me. its not that bad of a story, looking forward to reading the next part or sequil to this story... maybe find out something else behind the story...

lol, only flaws i saw where (i think) 3 things
1.Puntuation= if you've noticed in LSF iputa coma after their dun talking, BUT before the second "
2.The spacing could use a tad bit of work
3.Some of your capitalizations got a little mixed up
ex: Riku is Kissing him.
Instead of Kissing, you might want to look over the next chapter you write for thatkind of mistake, ok?
4.Also, I highly apologize, especally for this comment, but you might want to check your grammer, dear.
ex: Just then and there. Sora felt something on his lips.
Instead of the period at the"Just then and there" I would advise something like this: Just then and there, Sora felt somethiing on his lips.

But yeah, just mostly watch for your puntuation and grammer is the most important advise,'kay?

=) Have a merry x-mas, & happy new yr, especially if i dun update b4 new yrs.

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That sucked monkey balls

I really liked this story! RxS FOREVER! LOL... oh yea thanks for my 1st review!

Aww, absolutely too adorable

*Squeals* -- *Bounces up and down* So cute! Oh my gosh... I love it, I tell ya, LOVE IT!! ^_^ Aww. It was just so cute. I loved how Riku would never let Sora get away with not telling him. Hehe. So funny.

Aww. Riku likes Sora back, how awesome. =) Hehe. I really did enjoy this...can't wait to read your other fics! ^^ *Hugs*

~ SkaterBABE57

There was a few spelling errors/typos, but it didn't block your meaning, so I'll say its pretty good! Also, I suggest putting exclaimation marks (!) at the end of the screamed words.

Its cute though ^^

Aw, I really liked it! It was so adorable! I started laughing when Sora threw his diary out the window into a basket. That was so hilarious 'cause I could imagine him doing that. ^^ You did a good job! Just a few mistakes here and there that need to be fixed. You should have more confidence in your writing!

:heart:

-Pyro

I it's cute i like it!

Cute story. And you made it valantines day nice touch. Good job. For cute oneshots that earned a 8/10

That was SO GOOD! Very cute and AWESOME! Just a little spelling errors but everyone else was GREAT!

aw that was so cute and romantic well done ^-^

Wow great job! Loved this story! Well there were a few typos, and the past tense thing was a little messed up but other than that it was great! Loved the tickeling scene it was so cute! ^_^ Well hope you write more cause I just loved this story it was so adorable! I'll give you a cookie if you do! (::) I'm gonna put you on my author alert list and I'm gonna make this story a fav. cause I loved it so much! Until next time!

-Riku-stalker

Sweetie, it looks like you mostly just need someone to read over these things for you. lol! I bet you have a lot of great ideas, so I hope you're willing to take up my offer on being your beta. If not me, I'm sure there are others willing.

It was cute. ^^