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CharmedPeacekeeper
2007-06-13
ch 1, anon.
abuse(Member, too lazy to log in. Story of my life)

Okay, normally I'd wanna shoot the muse of the person who writes Farscape poetry, but you did okay. I really liked it.

Ever consider writing a songfic? Ah, I'll go check your profile and see for myself.
Aegle_Ad_Astra
2006-09-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow. I've never reviewed poetry before (don't really read it much either) but this was great. A short, sweet, gem of a thing, each verse has a line that I think turns it from just another poem to something beautiful.
KnightedRogue
2006-08-29
ch 1,
abuseNo, Aeryn! You are so bantha-brained sometimes, you know that?

Sorry.

I liked this, Trout. An interesting thing to put in form, but it came out well. I liked the bit about insane sanity - because, of course, that's what Aeryn would think about John. I also liked the break after "my prayer" just because it is very Aeryn not to put it in past-tense, but almost make it sound like she believes in prayer occasionally, when she loses herself. Which I like.

Again, nice work! Write more SW! SW!
Lattelady
2006-08-28
ch 1,
abuseNicely written and very much Aryen. Thanks for sharing.
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