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| On-A-Need-To-Know-Basis 2008-05-31 ch 12,  | abuseSwiftpaw is black-and-white, not ginger. |
| On-A-Need-To-Know-Basis 2008-05-31 ch 4, | abuseMousefur and Running wind are siblings! EW!! |
| On-A-Need-To-Know-Basis 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseDustpelt was Darkstripe's first apprentince, not Londtail. |
| musicgoddess618 2008-01-25 ch 13, | abuseSob...so sad. And a cliffie! I can't wait for updates...it rhymes. |
| musicgoddess618 2008-01-25 ch 6, | abuse"Ding dong Thistleclaw is dead!" Yay! He was a rotten one too. |
| musicgoddess618 2008-01-25 ch 5, | abuseGreat! I assume you know this but you typed Mousefur as Mousepaw once towards the end when tigerclaw tells her to run. |
| -Hope- Suddenly I See 2008-01-20 ch 13, | abuseUPDATE! You've got one of the best stories i've read in a long while up here! Please update? *~Aquastream |
| Tamera Ali 2007-12-09 ch 13, | abuseyou must update. i luv ur stuff! ty for being such a good writer! |
| Gingerstar 2007-11-18 ch 13, | abuseGreat story!! But you had some instances in the last chappie,[12], where you said I;me;instead of he and he. just wanted to point this out. But your story still rocks!:P |
| Calicopelt 2007-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseupdate soon- this is a cool story! =) |
| Moonflower 2007-06-06 ch 13, anon. | abuseI love this story I really like the RunningxMouse and the LongxBrindle they are good pairs! *Hands you a virtual cookie* Awesome job! |
| Rabbitstorm 2007-05-25 ch 13, | abuseI like it. |
| Rabbitstorm 2007-05-08 ch 12, | abuseI like this story a lot. |
| Goveg 2007-05-06 ch 12, anon. | abuseThis is good, but you made one mistake. Swiftkit or pretty soon, Swiftpaw, is a black and white cat. Not a ginger one. But I like your story! |
| Berries-R-Blue 2007-05-06 ch 12, | abuseYES keep going before your fresh out of ideas. |