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inttersting

Muy Bien!
I read all four chapters, and I like it so far. I especially like how Ash is emotionally wrapped up in his thoughts sometimes, and substitutes one pain for another in the fourth chapter, like an Emo. ^^
Check out my PB fic sometime.
update soon...

hi, it's keren!!
hmm. this is a peculair story since i had absolutely no idea what's going on, but i think i've got it now. okay. good writing, you should finish this one.

peace kidd

Very interesting idea! I'd love to see where you go with this!

Hey hope you continue with this. I loved the game.