this is brilliant

I have nothing else to say

This was one damn HOT awesome story I loved it to bits I was capitaved in every chapter
My only regret is that i didn't find it sooner

Thanks for writing

Awesome fic! I always like strong Yugi, and with Bakura and Malik, the story is even better.

Wow cool those three together are hot. I felt more could be done with this but i did really enjoy reading it and all the interactions so hey! You didnt end it very well though...Yami reaching for a phone with a shaky hand is hardly an ending...i mean what purpose to the call was he gonna make, was he gonna leave them be, who was he calling...and then the others reactions now that 'the game ends' and all...ending VERY cut off.

Why llama...why was Yami refered to as that? It sounds dead funny but you never explained it so it makes little sense. You also need to work on spelling in particular. And one more thing was Bakura situated as 'fluffy' on Yugi's cell phone? Aye thats amusing and a little ironic too...according to my reckoning anyway...if i had to give him two words as descritpion that were totally different it would have to 'fluffy and dangerous', Malik (Yami) i think 'Psychotic and cute maybe or childish um not too sure him actually lol
though this was good...need MORE YxYBxYM!

Oh!**! It ewas going so nice... It kinda ended sharply. I can't say I liked it. Still the story was awsome, an u know the rest.
Take care.
Krazy Naoko

haha awesomeness all the way

Nice. :D *claps in applause*

great chapter! please update soon!

*worships you* there was just so much bashing of Seto and Yami in here it was just beautiful. Your story is one of the only Yu-Gi-Oh stories I like now and trust me your story rocks!

I loved the scenes. Great story. I hope Yami and Seto heed Yuugi's advice and go for love and not just lust.

I almost feel bad for Yami. Good chapter. Too bad alert are down again.

Love the story! Update? Please oh please oh please? Pretty please with Yami on top?

i just wanna say...I LOVE YOU! this is the best fic that i've read so far in a couple of months that has a threesome in it...m...thresomees...just so juicy...i REALLY can't wait fer the next update...so plz...plz plz plz...udpate real soon? m...threesomes are just awesome...heh...ja ne

XD Precious x)

aww, the last chap came too soon, you must update soon k? please?