Totally amazing story

I just found this story, what with my obsession with looking through old H/C fics. Pretty good, but I have one small comment...

The song lyrics are from two different songs, "Will I" and "Another Day". There isn't a song called "No Day But Today" in RENT.

Watch out for your spelling... eg. "dignaty," "incompatent," "exsistance."

Also, "Will I lose my dignity?..." If from RENT, but the song is called "Will I?" The rest is correctly marked, being from the other song, "No Day But Today."

I like how House says "'I should have told you I love you!'"

That's so much better than the normal "I love you," then yay, party, tears, etc...

I like that their son is named after Wilson... and that Wilson died of cancer and didn't even tell anyone is just poetically emo.

The way the story ran was different, with the huge jumps in time... House especially seemed out of character in several things, and this was a little too dramatic for me... but you had some good things here.

Another line I found interesting was House's "'Its happening, isn't it?'" I'm not complaining about this one being OOC, I genuinely find it intriguing- House who said there is no dignity in death, the brilliant physician, scientist, etc... spoke these words.

I think I like that.

very sad but i really like it. very good.

Ally

omg i love rent and i love house and i love this fic...fabulous...i cried...again...god whats wrong with me crying all the time!

very nice!

Ohmygod! I loved it. It was perfect! Made me cry. Great story. :)

That was so well-written! Romantic without being too mushy.

omg this is awesome...the best part is when he's getting her to stay and i also favor the end! :D

Great story, and the song is called "Finale B".