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| LadybugNixie 2008-06-14 ch 1,  | abuseAw. That was such a cute story. Rune/Thatz is just adorable, I think. You write well, good story, good plot even dispite the simplicity of it. |
| Black Ice Phoenix Wolf 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abuseAww, good job! -^.^- I really like it! |
| :-) 2007-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI absolutely love the gentleness of this story! |
| ShinigamixGirl 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseSO swet! Aw...! Love ur fic. |
| SharkGirl 2006-10-06 ch 1, anon. | abuse3 reviews? That's all people on this sight could give?! Whta bad taste. I like this expecally the detail you included though the plot line jusmped around a bit. It would make sense that Rune would have trouble with his hair once in while. Dane Soar |
| Animegoil 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseCute! Hm... at first, I thought the kiss had been way to cliched and I was like... that doesn't fit. But then I read the last couple paragraphs, and you tied it up nicely. it was definitely cute, and I really liked the description of everything, especially that part about realizing the top buttons where undone when Thatz breathed ^_^ I really liked that, cause that just seemed so realistic. Probably though, the only complaint I have is that I didn't _feel_ like these were really Rune and Thatz. Like, I knew it was them, and there was nothing blantantly out of character, but I still didn't feel-- this is undeniably Rune and Thatz... hm.., dunno. Good job overall. |
| xxDKGurlxx 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abusehm.Nice.Very nice.Actually,you were pretty lucky im still reading a yaoi fanfiction after some damage to my yaoi-semi-tolerance, i.e. pictures...=shudders= but this was actually cute,not total in-depth yaoi like...anyway Guess thats all,since its a one-shot...Goodbye! THE super-flying-squirrel-queen, Daphne~ |
| Misura 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseA fun read, which reminded me of the manga at its best (i.e. light-hearted humor and happiness, not angsty tragedy). I especially like the way you wrote these two, leaving each one to be their unique self and yet somehow bringing them together. |