What an AWESOME Jackson backstory! LOVE this! I cannot wait to read more!

Ah ... the final chapter! You've done such a great job painting Jackson's life for us up to the Tex-Mex scene! Really, really, REALLY great job! Everything flowed perfectly, there weren't any spelling or grammar mistakes that I was able to catch, and it didn't feel too rushed or too dragged out! I like the way that you let us into Jackson's mind to see how he works. I can't wait to read the next one! GREAT JOB!

I've always thought of the Red Eye job as Jackson's "retirement", and I like that you've written it that way. Now that it's been revealed that Pedram worked to put a hit out on Jackson, and was obviously ** that it was botched, I wonder how she'll retaliate?

Wow! Jackson's moving on up! Too bad Poulain had to get that family jab in there right before signing the company over to Jackson.

If only Jackson had stayed around a little longer ...

I wish Poulain would've just shot Lyna in the face, and got it over with. However, I have a feeling she's going to be one of those hard-to-kill people.

Wow! Another interesting way to wrap Lisa and Jackson's threads together!

Honestly, just like Lisa was feeling, 9/11 put a lot of things in perspective for people.

Being American, and having watched the 9/11 attacks live on TV when they happened, I've been curious to see how they were going to be portrayed. Very ominous, so far.

Okay, thankfully, Melissa and the girls are still okay! But this meeting with the whole society coming up sounds fishy ...

Now I'm freaking out that something (else) is going to happen to Melissa. I swear, if you kill her off, I'll cry.

An interesting twist there at the end. Poulain's professional interest in Jackson seems to be mounting.

I'm happy that Melissa got a happy ending, so far. But poor Jackson! Oh well, we all know who's in his future! One Ms. Lisa Reisert.

"Oh. No, I'm not suicidal," suddenly jumps to mind.

Can't see Jackson as a South African diamond dealer's kid. Although, I've painted a very narrow picture of him. I wonder what his interest is in Surahbi ...