Very interesting concept, and wonderfully written story. You've managed to tap into that still young but still wiser than his years at times quality that Naruto has in the manga and stayed true to it. Excellent job!

Bravo

Very well done. If they ever added anything like this to the actual story it would be amazing development for the character.

this is a very well written and thoughtful story. Really well written :)

this is so depressing...
and very well written. i like it ;)
good job :)

That was beautifully written and presented. It even gave off a poetic feel. Well done.

I think this was one of the most profound oneshots I've ever read. The concept was just so deep, perceptive, and brilliant! The fic itself was beautifully written!

very creative and interesting twist on it. that makes alot of sense and is very insightful.

This was really deep, it changes how Kage Bunshin are seen, well at least its my case.

Excellent story!

Still want you to continue though. Maybe make someone put it in their story. 'Cuz it's one great idea.

... Deep... All I can really say... (I'm gonna read th eother story and I'm writing something (hopefully) more useful in terms of criticizm)

damn thats profound
good work

i like the idea. i might use this goodjob



love from Pigle

I enjoyed your concept on Kage Bunshin.

dam this was good and insightful