Hey,

this was such a wonderful chapter. I loved the way you structered it and slowly pulled in the reader with your details. Pieces about Merle are so rare. Good ones are however impossible to find. Your's was definetly first class.(I really loved "Oh the usual, too much rain, not enough sun. The gardener is off his rocker.”; it was so funny)

I don't understand why you don't have a ton of reviews for this-you are such a good writer. I hope you'll continue with this!

Now, on a selfish note. I have also written a story 'Beyond Reminiscence' and would really, really love to know what you think, if you don't mind.

Thank you! :0)

Yet another fic of yesteryear... When, oh when will you continue Twisted Fate?! The skies cry in anguish over the tragedy of leaving such a story unfinished!

... okay, enough dramatacizing. =) Beautifully written as always, with great insights into a (now mature) Merle, although not too much change, which is always a plus, as not even the war with Zaibach could completely blow away Merle's very perky(?) personality and energy. I never thought Merle was a person to ponder over flowers, however, so that felt vaguely OOC, but only if you ignore the years that have passed.

P.S. Adele needs to die, but only after her role is done. Being torn apart by Hitomi, I mean! XD