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| Dark Reborn 2008-03-04 ch 10,  | abuseThis is a pretty good story! Thank you for writing this and the story this was supposed to be a sequal to! ^_^ |
| Corn Cob Xov 2008-02-12 ch 10, | abuseAnother awesome fic Spoons! Such a fluffy happy ending to this one too! Luv it! ~Lady Xovern |
| indigo's ocean 2007-05-10 ch 10, | abuseHee, Mirai is a cute song. Did you get it from Sin High? (That's where I heard of it.) Honestly, I think that this was better than the first one. You weren't afraid to put humor and lighthearted parts in it, and I honestly think you write those better than angst. (Although Dynamite kind of proves me wrong.) There wasn't as much angst, and Pride's extremely cute. I was really disappointed that it ended up being Roy/Ed though. I like Ed/Envy so much better. xD But that's okay. It was a good story anyway. I honestly don't see why you think this sequel is bad, I liked it a lot and it actually made me laugh (instead of stare in horror at bloody gory parts). Your Envy's really, really cute. ~Sirius |
| Colonel Roxas-chan 2007-01-15 ch 10, | abuseAW! So sweet! |
| Sectored 2006-10-31 ch 5, | abusePride sat in front of Roy’s fire, which, thankfully, was in a brick fire-place. Common sense is good, people. Common sense can help stop your house from burning to the ground. OMG! so random, but so true. I laughed aloud and had people stare when i read that comment. Such a cute chapter! ROY! YAY! I missed him! i luv roy. he's awsome. OMG! on to the next chapter for mme! |
| Sectored 2006-10-31 ch 4, | abuseOMFG! Poor pride! *sobs* A QUOTE FROM THE STORY! ~~ “…what the hell are you on? I seriously need some.” “You need some train-seats?” Pride asked curiously. Envy groaned. “Never mind…” -zomg! he's so kawaii and innocent...!- ~~ on to the next chapter! |
| Butterfly85 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseSO CUTE ^-^ I love that Envy is so sweet to Pride/Ed |
| Sectored 2006-10-05 ch 3, | abuseAHAHA! this is so great. I love Pride!Ed's personality. Kawaii! ^^ i LOVED that last bit, all the “Get his pants off!” I remeber that from the manga. Lmao. Heh, on to next! |
| Sectored 2006-10-05 ch 2, | abuseAW! POOR GREED! Gettin' all confused! I just LOVE greed so much! I just got FMA vol 7 and 8, so i know all about greed now. He's so kool! Anyhow on to the next chap! |
| Sectored 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseAWWZ! THAT LAST SCENE WAS SO CUTE! No wonder you yelled out 'Cute!' in the middle o' class ;] Woot! i like it so far XD on to the next chap! |
| Mystykat 2006-09-25 ch 10, | abuseheh. I got myself an account so I can review and crap on here...wow. I'm amazing. Oh and I hope you know who this is! *is huge fan* |
| AntennaGirl 2006-09-15 ch 10, | abuseI'm sorry I didn't review earlier! My internet was dead... But I really liked the ending, it was great! I really enjoyed this story |
| koneko-kitty-chan 2006-09-11 ch 10, | abuseWOO! Awesome story such a cute ending! I never replied earlier sorry... But the ending was awesome Im gunna be sure to read your other stories! |
| GreedxEd 2006-09-10 ch 10, | abusedid ed and roy enjoy the honeymoon XD |
| BreathlessFlame 2006-09-10 ch 10, | abusedon't say the epiloge is crappy! i loved it! i'm so glad i could watch this story progress to where it is now. i will definatly read more of your stories in the future if they're anything like this! much luv! *glomps* *gives virtual plushies of everyone in the story* now you have a virtual pluchie collection! |