 marium 2009-05-18 . chapter 4dunno but it's getting good! keep up the good work! update soon! ^W^ |
 RisaSatoshiForever 2007-04-01 . chapter 5I want more!! Please hurry. It's really good. |
 voldysXangel 2006-11-01 . chapter 4I love your story! I think Satoshi should welcome her in! XD
One quick comment though. Didn't Mr. Hiwatari die in the last episode? I call getting stabbed in the back with an axe dead...XD
Great story! Update soon!
-Paige |
 marie 2006-10-30 . chapter 3 this is really getting good !! please update soon !! |
 bishou-kun 2006-10-26 . chapter 3 Awesome.. update soon.. |
 funky-squirrel 2006-10-07 . chapter 3You deserve more reviews. :) This is quite well-written. I'm really interested in Risa's reaction to the truth. And Satoshi leaving in three days?? Oh, that's so sad, but I guess it might force Risa to figure out her feelings for Satoshi. maybe...maybe not. ha ha..
Anyway, babbling away. But in short: This is great! Keep up the good work! |
 ThePowerOfBrownies 2006-10-01 . chapter 2Update soon Please! |
 issamalv 2006-09-25 . chapter 2I really hope that you update soon, because I'm really hooked on the story!! So far, it's great. |
 Janika 2006-09-21 . chapter 2Azumano middle school? I was wondering what it was called. Do you know what it means? What about the name of the museum? I heard it once referred to as the Central Museum, but I don't think that's right.
Risa's feelings are really familiar to me. I can understand her need to be loved, but especially the feelings of love she never had, but THOUGHT she had.
I guess they found his father. Must have been a sad occasion. Are you going to have a flashback? That might help clear up some things. Hey, this one has potential. Don't stop writing it! |
 Janika 2006-09-21 . chapter 1The chapter title confuses me. A stepping stone? Like a way to cross a river or something? And why would it be shining? Emotional shining? Ok, so if I'm guessing right, this is the transition from Satoshi's life w/o friendship to one w/ it, and the stepping stone could either be his decision to live a good life, or Risa since she's helping him. |
 wolf-of-the-blue-fire 2006-09-13 . chapter 2 it's a thiller and i cant wait to read more. please continue...i love it! |
 aPpLecHeRrY 2006-09-10 . chapter 2Aww... nothing much happened... and a cliffy..?! dang. got nothing more to say.=) |
 aPpLecHeRrY 2006-08-25 . chapter 1tumataas ang kilay ko. uhmm.. can't review properly at the moment. next chap nlng cguro. hindi ko pa kase gets masyado kung ano talaga yung plot.:) oh well...=) |
 eriloca 2006-08-23 . chapter 1Satoshi X Risa is my fav couple! You left me wanting to read more. Hope you update soon! |