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Alyssa Halliwell
2009-10-03 . chapter 5
Just wanted to say, that I love this a lot so far, I think it's really a interesting plotline with some interesting characters, particularly Leahy
Bernie62
2008-12-29 . chapter 2
I remembered reading this story that I had stored in my favorites. I pulled it up this week; I had started it so long ago and forgotten the title and wondered what ever happened to it. I want to encourage you to finish it as it is so intriguing (spelling?)
Von
2008-10-07 . chapter 5
Ohh, I LOVE the really new stuff!

I greatly look forward to new chapters. Your info on the gypsies is very interesting, as I've never heard of them before.
ohmygodnotthecar
2008-08-12 . chapter 5
This is great. Incorporating the bracelets was a really nice touch. Please keep going! I want to know what happens next :)
lilgurlgreen
2008-07-31 . chapter 5
I love this story! Hope you update soon!
ChaiGrl
2008-04-13 . chapter 5
I just discovered your story and read it straight though. You have me hooked! LOL. I loved the back story that you created for the boys. It really flows and has fantastic characters. Keep up the awesome writing. I hope to see another update soon. What a cliffy you have left is at. LOL. Take care and Happy Writing!
Bernie62
2007-11-23 . chapter 5
keep on going. this is a great story.
Linderhill
2007-08-11 . chapter 5
I hope you continue this soon. Its a fascinating story with an interesting look at what the Winchesters' background could be.
KatiKat
2007-06-05 . chapter 5
Fantastic fic. Very original. I hope that you'll continue it soon!
neuroticsquirrel1
2007-06-04 . chapter 5
Awesome story! I generally avoid when it comes to Supernatural, but someone recced this on lj and I love it! It's so nice to see a good, in character story with actual plot. I'm dying to see what happens next!
Sparkle45
2007-05-17 . chapter 5
I'm still really loving this story. Can't wait for the next update.
Sera and Tails
2007-05-01 . chapter 5
Wow.

What a masterpiece, thus far. I've read all the chapters and there are SO many things that I liked! Characterisation was lovely, especially on Sam. I love Dean's introspection as well, so true to form.

Truthfully, when I read the summary I thought "C'mon...gypsies!?" But I am so glad I looked twice and gave it a chance. Lovely, lovely fic with exceptional construction (props to your betas and your talents, because I couldn't find -anything- wrong with any of the chapters!). The careful attention to detail is really very much appreciated, and there were so many word choices that I loved.

"“Tell me what you saw in the tea leaves.” Gently. Inevitably. Irresistibly.

“Death,” she said, her eyes closed. “In three.” Mhmm. Sets the tone beautifully. I love it.

I promise when I'm less sleep-deprived I'll come back and review all the previous chapters. I think it was chapter 2 or 3 that was my ultimate fave, but at this sleepy moment, I cannot remember why!

Do update soon please!

Cheers,
Tails
lady scribe of avandell
2007-04-03 . chapter 5
Oh wow. This is bloody amazing.

I'm here on Big Pink's recommendation - she mentioned it on LJ, and I knew you betaed for her, so I figured I'd better check it out. And wow. Just wow.

I love what you've done with this, with the fleshing out of the boys' childhood (such as it is) and with the inclusion of the Romani. Awesome. I like Agent Leahy, I think - I'm still not quite sure what to make of her, and I do wonder at her intentions (at first I thought she might have Romani blood in her, but I believe that theory's been debunked by this chapter). I really loved the parallels between Leahy and Sam's meeting and Dean's meeting with Zora this chapter. Subtle and cool.

I'm very excited to see where you take this next. I'll definitely be watching for more!
lelann37
2007-03-20 . chapter 5
oh yeah! love it! the agent's getting kinda creepy...showing up in their room, questioning poor sammy. i like dean under the spell when he keeps realizing he's under a spell..
uad
2007-03-12 . chapter 5
I'm really enjoying this story and the parallels between the gypsises/romani and the Winchesters. Hope there's more soon. Thanks for sharing.
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