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Reviews For: How Pancy´s bad day turned into a good day

makito06
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abusewow! great!! smut! amazing!!
hermioneindrag
2008-04-19
ch 1, anon.
abusehm, the writing leaves a bit to be desired...but you're right about the rare pairing needing love! don't give up! also, i'm not sure that millicent needed to have lost a lot of weight before this could work...what, don't fat girls get love too? well, *i* think it would have been better if she didn't have to change ^_^

-militent feminist
SetTheTruthFree
2007-08-07
ch 1,
abuseit was good...that was my first f/f slash to read...not a lot of people have them up...it's weird
dracolover18
2007-01-12
ch 1,
abusei'm glad you put in the part about millicent being prettier
cause i don't think i could have taken the...sexual parts with how JKR describes her
it would be icky(wow am I five?)
it's really good
and congrats for writing a practically nonexplored pairing
great job!
i loved it
you rock
ladyBlue Wolf
2006-10-19
ch 1,
abuseVair good... LOL

-Peace.
Rough Diamond
2006-08-23
ch 1,
abuseyou spelt pansy wrong, its not "pancy".
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