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Anaya
2006-08-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseI've never seen Dawson's Creek in my life, so I'm in no danger of noticing borrowed lines.

You've really got Jolee pegged in this, I can just imagine him forcing Carth to admit to his feelings, just as Revan forces Carth to talk about things he'd rather not.

Good job. :)
Shady
2006-08-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like it. it's pretty good, if you do do a second ch that could work too!! I do like it and since I don't really watch Dawson's Creek I didn't notice.

Good job!!
Shayden
DhtrofIsis
2006-08-23
ch 1,
abuseCute Fluffiness and Carth angst, lol. Makes my inner fangirl squee.
Lady Sichi
2006-08-23
ch 1,
abuseI love the 'There's enough angest in this room to fill a kolto tank'.

Priceless. I love this one shot, very nicely written =)
Dvana
2006-08-23
ch 1,
abuseVery nice. And I don't watch Dawson's Creek, so you're safe from me. ^^

Your 'beth' comment confused me greatly for a moment. That's my name too, and I haven't had enough sleep, lol.
Child-of-the-Dawn
2006-08-23
ch 1,
abuseAnd that is why you gotta love Jolee Bindo: resident grandfather. XD Well done and cute. I dont watch Dawsons Creek,but that episode sounds good alluva sudden...XD
Hangman By Cent
2006-08-23
ch 1,
abusehaha surprise indeed! i like the sounds of this different Revan, especially how brash her words to carth were. dawson's creek? meh, never seen it. what else? hmm, well, i liked it! and no, i don't hate you. you barely need me anyways! besides, i'm just glad you stopped playing SWG long enough to write a lick, no matter what it was! til next time then ^_^
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