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| Anaya 2006-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've never seen Dawson's Creek in my life, so I'm in no danger of noticing borrowed lines. You've really got Jolee pegged in this, I can just imagine him forcing Carth to admit to his feelings, just as Revan forces Carth to talk about things he'd rather not. Good job. :) |
| Shady 2006-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it. it's pretty good, if you do do a second ch that could work too!! I do like it and since I don't really watch Dawson's Creek I didn't notice. Good job!! Shayden |
| DhtrofIsis 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseCute Fluffiness and Carth angst, lol. Makes my inner fangirl squee. |
| Lady Sichi 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseI love the 'There's enough angest in this room to fill a kolto tank'. Priceless. I love this one shot, very nicely written =) |
| Dvana 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. And I don't watch Dawson's Creek, so you're safe from me. ^^ Your 'beth' comment confused me greatly for a moment. That's my name too, and I haven't had enough sleep, lol. |
| Child-of-the-Dawn 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseAnd that is why you gotta love Jolee Bindo: resident grandfather. XD Well done and cute. I dont watch Dawsons Creek,but that episode sounds good alluva sudden...XD |
| Hangman By Cent 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abusehaha surprise indeed! i like the sounds of this different Revan, especially how brash her words to carth were. dawson's creek? meh, never seen it. what else? hmm, well, i liked it! and no, i don't hate you. you barely need me anyways! besides, i'm just glad you stopped playing SWG long enough to write a lick, no matter what it was! til next time then ^_^ |