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saragillie
2008-07-08 . chapter 11
This story was so hilarious. Just what I needed to brighten my day. I hope you do more collaborations like this one. The idea was very creative and execution was excellent.
BonesDBchippie
2008-06-09 . chapter 11
WHO is this again? *snickers*

Four... score and...a Gazillion years ago...OH yeah, we were forgetting about that weren't we? *giggles* Yeah, It's NOT like I've been real quick on the uptake with the reviews either, huh chicks?? BUT O o o o h an update on Bali? So o o o EXCITED!! Eheh, a might short, BUT hey! I'm GOOD--take anything I can get!! LOV'D the TONS of monkies on Zack's desk!! TOO FUNNY! And Cam screech'n was a HOOT! OH and next date is all B&B planning! WooHOO! Riding crop huh? I best not get too excited...it's "T" rated!! LOL!!
YUP, I know I've got your other's to 'catch up' on here right quick. Be doin' that real soon...Happy trails to you...hehe!

~G :D
PurplePicklesUnite
2008-06-09 . chapter 11
lol love it, great ending!
Ares' Warrior Babe
2008-06-08 . chapter 11
I've gotta say, I really want that VR machine! Then I'd be in Australia!


Awesome story!
mendenbar
2008-06-08 . chapter 11
Riding crop? What a wonderful picture that makes! Now I have something to visualize as I spend another 8hrs at the ballpark watching my kid sit the bench.
Dancing Phalanges
2008-06-08 . chapter 11
Omgosh, loved it. It isn't finished though is it? THERE MUST BE MORE!
goldpiece
2008-06-07 . chapter 11
...until we meet again. Happy trails to you...

Yay! An update. Yay, BB are so cute, and poor Zack all confuzzled over the monkeys...along with everyone else. It was a fun ride, and I'm sad to see it end.

Melissa
LittleDrusilla
2007-12-23 . chapter 10
Monkeys...they're everywhere. ROFLMAO! OMG I laughed so hard I cried when Zach was being chased by the macaque!! This is one of the most enjoyable stories I've read in a while. Thanks for sharing it! Happy Holidays!
chocolatefan
2007-11-04 . chapter 10
cool story! please continue
Mia
2007-07-13 . chapter 10
This is a great story! I just wish that you would update.
mendenbar
2007-05-15 . chapter 10
Yes. Bunches and oodles and monkey bars and stuff.
BonesDBchippie
2007-05-14 . chapter 10
LADIES...
CAM! ZACK! B&B! Oh MY!! hehe!! YUP! Missed ya! FUNNY chapter too! WHAT a hoot Jack wanting to send Cam an exotic pet for her birthday!! AND ZACK!! LOL! Intelligence does NOT come with with common sense!!~~Boy genius forgot--hehe--that he'd set off the alarms!! But at least he's been around Jack long enough to come up with a good cover story!! LOL! AND I'm LOV'N B&B with all the sexual tension and carrying on! WooHOO! Now ladies, let's see if we can't continue this in a little bit more timely manner! At least within, oh say a month?? LOL!! JUST like to raz ya! I'll be so busy within the next month or so if you do update be happy if you get a review between graduation/ baseball/grad parties/boyscouts/college registrations/LIFE! BUT feel free to update!!

~G :D
spacekid77
2007-05-14 . chapter 10
Excellent! Can't wait to see what happens next... glad to see you guys updating this story!!
Thanks for writing!
Sonya
VikingJedi
2007-05-14 . chapter 10
This chapter had me laughing outloud as I read it. I was very happy to see that there was an update! Keep up the great work!
goldpiece
2007-05-13 . chapter 10
Did we miss us? I know I did...miss us that is. Next we need to do Awkward, you know that right...maybe set up a writing date or something. You know I like this chapter. It was fun to write, and I can't wait for us to finish it.

Goldy
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