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saragillie
2008-07-08
ch 11,
abuseThis story was so hilarious. Just what I needed to brighten my day. I hope you do more collaborations like this one. The idea was very creative and execution was excellent.
BonesDBchippie
2008-06-09
ch 11,
abuseWHO is this again? *snickers*

Four... score and...a Gazillion years ago...OH yeah, we were forgetting about that weren't we? *giggles* Yeah, It's NOT like I've been real quick on the uptake with the reviews either, huh chicks?? BUT O o o o h an update on Bali? So o o o EXCITED!! Eheh, a might short, BUT hey! I'm GOOD--take anything I can get!! LOV'D the TONS of monkies on Zack's desk!! TOO FUNNY! And Cam screech'n was a HOOT! OH and next date is all B&B planning! WooHOO! Riding crop huh? I best not get too excited...it's "T" rated!! LOL!!
YUP, I know I've got your other's to 'catch up' on here right quick. Be doin' that real soon...Happy trails to you...hehe!

~G :D
PurplePicklesUnite
2008-06-09
ch 11,
abuselol love it, great ending!
Ares' Warrior Babe
2008-06-08
ch 11,
abuseI've gotta say, I really want that VR machine! Then I'd be in Australia!


Awesome story!
mendenbar
2008-06-08
ch 11,
abuseRiding crop? What a wonderful picture that makes! Now I have something to visualize as I spend another 8hrs at the ballpark watching my kid sit the bench.
Dancing Phalanges
2008-06-08
ch 11,
abuseOmgosh, loved it. It isn't finished though is it? THERE MUST BE MORE!
goldpiece
2008-06-07
ch 11,
abuse...until we meet again. Happy trails to you...

Yay! An update. Yay, BB are so cute, and poor Zack all confuzzled over the monkeys...along with everyone else. It was a fun ride, and I'm sad to see it end.

Melissa
LittleDrusilla
2007-12-23
ch 10,
abuseMonkeys...they're everywhere. ROFLMAO! OMG I laughed so hard I cried when Zach was being chased by the macaque!! This is one of the most enjoyable stories I've read in a while. Thanks for sharing it! Happy Holidays!
chocolatefan
2007-11-04
ch 10,
abusecool story! please continue
Mia
2007-07-13
ch 10, anon.
abuseThis is a great story! I just wish that you would update.
mendenbar
2007-05-15
ch 10,
abuseYes. Bunches and oodles and monkey bars and stuff.
BonesDBchippie
2007-05-14
ch 10,
abuseLADIES...
CAM! ZACK! B&B! Oh MY!! hehe!! YUP! Missed ya! FUNNY chapter too! WHAT a hoot Jack wanting to send Cam an exotic pet for her birthday!! AND ZACK!! LOL! Intelligence does NOT come with with common sense!!~~Boy genius forgot--hehe--that he'd set off the alarms!! But at least he's been around Jack long enough to come up with a good cover story!! LOL! AND I'm LOV'N B&B with all the sexual tension and carrying on! WooHOO! Now ladies, let's see if we can't continue this in a little bit more timely manner! At least within, oh say a month?? LOL!! JUST like to raz ya! I'll be so busy within the next month or so if you do update be happy if you get a review between graduation/ baseball/grad parties/boyscouts/college registrations/LIFE! BUT feel free to update!!

~G :D
spacekid77
2007-05-14
ch 10,
abuseExcellent! Can't wait to see what happens next... glad to see you guys updating this story!!
Thanks for writing!
Sonya
VikingJedi
2007-05-14
ch 10,
abuseThis chapter had me laughing outloud as I read it. I was very happy to see that there was an update! Keep up the great work!
goldpiece
2007-05-13
ch 10,
abuseDid we miss us? I know I did...miss us that is. Next we need to do Awkward, you know that right...maybe set up a writing date or something. You know I like this chapter. It was fun to write, and I can't wait for us to finish it.

Goldy
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