So far I have only read the first chapter of this, but I look forward to continuing. I was a little unsure at first how I would feel about something like this. I have never been a very big fan of Sakura, and I cannot help but doubt that her private thoughts are this methodical. She has always seemed very frivolous to me in the manga, and only slightly less so in the anime. Nevertheless I did enjoy this and I will continue to read and review.

Frankly, the only thing that bothers me is following the Prime Time Directive to leave everything in place for She-Who-Must-Be-Blamed's continuity. In my world of happy denial, JKR suffered a tragic piano accident just after submitting the final version of GoF, leaving her completely unable to type and inflict us with prophecies, the 7 Plot Coupons of Immortality, or the 3 Plot Coupons of Uberness. Harry wiggled out of the ropes at the cemetary, Nevilled the resurrection potion, and escaped with Ced's body

yup so very true! i suspected this was coming. woulda been better to make the slug guard it. oh well. such is life

rotflmmfao!

way to go kakashi!

it was so interesting the way you described his warren of a mind and the traps and distractions he'd set up. i liked this and the last chapter. good job

boy is he gonna get the shock of his life...err memory

holy shit i didn't see that coming!

oh no! tomu is gonna be in for it this time. XD

well she always was a smart girl for sure.

how interesting

Well done, this story is quite imaginative. Adding a great depth to the characters without changing them too much. Truly a great story.

I enjoyed this story. thanks for writing it.

This is a great story! I really like how you had the ninja handle diary Tom and how you eventually sent it back into the HP world.

Joy. I really liked this. :D Proverb number 23 was really perfect for the note Sakura wrote and what happened to the diary. :D

:D Keep up the wonderfulness. :D