Excellent prose. I'm not usually one for poetry that rhymes(I wrote a number of them in high school) but this it pretty good.
Hmm..I wonder if Danny will ever figure out how Sam feels in reality. lol

Keep up the good work.

-Jae-

Uwah! This was so good!! Especially the last stanza! X3

TOTALLY AWESOME!^^ Great job!! That was sweet!

Very nice concluding line. i commend you. :D

Amazing! This looks like you put alot of effort into it! Good job!