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| irony882 2007-11-05 ch 1,  | abuseYou've structured this fic very cleverly. I really like the way you've written the story from the end to the beginning in italics, yet we can't forget about the beginning to the end in regular font. Excellent job! |
| JennCorinthos 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseOMG! Fabulous... Love how everythign started and worked itself backwards... AMAZING! JENNIFER |
| TriGemini 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good to read. I especially liked how you worked backwards from the end when Danny finally ends up with Lindsay and to when he finally gets the guts to do what Flack says he should do. Take a chance to find out whether there could be something between him and Lindsay. Also, it kind of made sense as well in the end. Because it shows he's doing what he's supposed to do. Which is taking the chance like Flack suggested in the end. Which again, leads to the beginning of the other story within this one. Really liked how you wrote it out. It was like two stories in one. |
| snowbear96 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abuseWonderful, I like the structure |
| roswellwbfan 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abuseThis totally rocked, and I loved the structure! Well done! |
| all the glitters 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuse"Country girls like her don’t take up interest in broken-past city boys like me." and "But she’s not Lindsay." simply took my breath away. Absolutely amazing.♥♥ |
| UrbanCowgirl247 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseWow! that was amazing! you are such a great writer please write more DL stories! |
| Aemie 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abusethat is so so cool! its great to read something so different and distinct! well done! |
| dddynamite 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseI don't really get it's weel writen and stuff but I got confused! |
| sugah66 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseYay! You posted it here, where I can add it to my faves! :adds story to faves: Seriously, I don't think there's anything I can say that I haven't said already, but I loved this story! It was awesome! :bounce:bounce:bounce: Can I just say again what a dork I felt like not getting the title until, like, the very end? And then I was like :facepalm:. |
| meadow567 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abusei liked it. At first I was thinking he was daydreaming about the situation. It's really good. |
| EleanorArroway 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good! I liked the style too! |
| soswimmer13 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abusei like the story format. very odyssey(sp?)-like. |
| The Little Corinthian 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseOh, I loved that! Very well done! Interesting layout, as well, very nice. Great job! |
| christina jean 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseDamn I love your fics! I loved the story structure, I thought it was very effective. And it has the added bonus that you immediately want to reread it to pick up the nuances you missed. And besides some scorching DL, we got a side of simmering Flack. Great job. |