I'm usually not a fan of stories with literally all fancharacters, but yours really pulled me in. Each character seems to have their own solid personality and none of them I rarely find annoying. (Although Celsia does get on my nerves once and a while, but I am still loving her character and motives.)

Your writing styles is also good. It's detailed but not like mine that describe litterally every little leaf (yeah, I need to work on that... O_O) but it also paints just the right picture; not too vague but not too lengthy. Very few spelling mistakes; something I applaude you for. The twists and turns of the plot also keeps me interested. They're confusing at first but as soon as you get into it, you find yourself unable to stop reading through every chapter that comes along. The orginal Sonic characters are also nicely belended into your world.

Speaking of your world, I like the descriptions and the creativity of it. Very well planned out and it seems like you know where you're going with this story. Congrats.

BTW: I am loving Apache's and Cree's relationship. You're taking it real slow which is something I like because you can't rush relationship. It's the cuteness I look forwad to in each chapter. I also like how you have Celsai playing sort of the 'mean girl' role in this but I can't help but understand her situation and motives. Truly, a well rounded character.

I try to give pros and cons to every story , but honestly yours had close to none. Congrats! It truly is an awesome story, just a couple things you can improve on. Anyways, sometimes you spacing is off. More so near the beginning where I found you randomly switching scenes without a page break. This could Fanfiction's fault or you could of looked over it. You are getting better at giving us a warning before you switch scenes though and I applaude you for that.

Other than that, just a few grammatical errors here and there that everyone gets. Otherwise, it is close to a almost perfect story! I will be eagerly awaiting for the next chapter.

P.S: I checked out your deviantart account and let me just say this, you've got talent. ^_^ Better than anything I could ever hope to draw. I will be looking forward to your comic of this story to. Until then!

I must say liz this is one great story though not as funny as some of your others it has a compelling story and i hope that you ypdate soon and also I must say you are a master of tourture end ing those chapters the way you did also the story has good charcter devlopment I you can truly imagin the changes that discoedia and Apache are going through agin I must say this is an amazing story and i hope you update soon

No! Not my spleen!
Oh well. At least it would distract me from my sunburn. I heard somewhere to try BenGay, but we only had Icy Hot. So I'm trying that. It surprisingly doesn't hurt.
What?
Oh, the chapter.
LEVEE, YOU EVIL BITCH!
That is all.
Now, bringeth me the uncensored Levee picture!

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*crosses fingers and hopes it works*

God this story is quite long, and it doesnt help thati'm quite pissed as i writw this. keep going and i'll read the reat eventually.

Excellent chapter! Both the past and present parts were written very well and both were very dramatic. Glad to see playing SA2B had a good affect on your writing!

gah!! stop with the major cliff-hangers! the tension is killing me! PLEASE update soon k? Ja ne ^_^

P.S. -does begging motion- please dont make the next chap a flashback or someting similar just to dat, just dont please! ToT I'll go crazy just take the damn antidote to Cree! PLEASE! -sniff-...im ok... -sniff-

Time for Celsia to get a reality check.

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Wow. That didn't suck half as bad as I expected it to. Let's hope doesn't eat all of those spaces...

You finally updated!

And there was much rejoicing.

Random people: yay.

I gotta admit, I sometimes get lost with these flashbacks, but this is getting interesting.
(Eye twitch)
Gotta... know... what... happens... to... Tails...
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Ya know... Im seriously getting tired of all this flashback chapies.. dont get me wrong they r good, well written, gives good info o everyones past and all, and i give props for dat... its just dat im more interested in wat tails is goin to do, will they get the antidote in time an' all and.. well ya know.Anyway just update soon and it was a good chap. Ja ne ^_^

I liked the last chapters. I'm really starting to like Celsia too - she comes across all innocent and then Wham! there she is seducing people! xD
And why can't Cree admit his love to Apache already?! They really are such a sweet pair. ^_^
Update soon!
- Hippy

Good, and update.

I can see why it's hard to find a title for this chapter.

You should make a Map or something of Aerania.

Oh. How's Akeii going to get out of this one?? Great chapter. ^_^b
- Hippy