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| creativedreamer48 2007-05-05 ch 5,  | abuseNO! I WANT MORE! OMG i love hailie! she's awesome and totally not insane! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! well maybe shes a little insane. ;P |
| Pictures 2006-10-09 ch 5, | abuseSorry i havent reveiwed in a while...i was just kind of in that lazy mode of not feling like logging in i blame school for that one.. Well anyways that was a great 4 chapters =] i loove this story and this line is such a Dallas line "If I ever see you around any of these **' kids again... I'll... I'll **' kill ya!" lol and It took all three of us to get him off the guy, and when we finally did, the guy took off running. "I'm suprised he can move at all," Johnny said in a voice barely above a whisper. "Yeah," I agreed, eyeing Dally suspiciously. "Me too." im suprised that kid whas able to move at all too. Well Update Son! =] |
| Maddiecake 2006-10-08 ch 5, | abuse:D Aw I missed reading this story! And the chapter was action-y! Update soon :D |
| Blondie 24-7 2006-10-08 ch 5, | abuseDon't say nothn'! LMAO UPDATE ASAP! |
| fullyxalive 2006-10-07 ch 5, | abuse"If I ever see you around any of these **' kids again... I'll... I'll **' kill ya!" That is such a Dally line, I swear. But it was funny. It made me chuckle. UPDATE. =] |
| SamSammySamantha 2006-10-07 ch 5, | abuseTHAT TOOK FOREVER. But it was worth it! |
| SamSammySamantha 2006-09-24 ch 4, | abuseVery insightful! That update took foever. Shame! =] |
| Maddiecake 2006-09-24 ch 4, | abuseo.o; That made me think of slash... -giggles- |
| fullyxalive 2006-09-24 ch 4, | abuseOoh, I like the last line. It was very...intriguing. I like this chapter. Update soon. |
| soda'slover 2006-09-18 ch 3, | abuseTheir improving, and she's fine. Great chapter, update soon please! |
| SamSammySamantha 2006-09-16 ch 3, | abuseHmm. I think she's just right, just normal. Good chapters! |
| fullyxalive 2006-09-16 ch 3, | abuseHm...I wonder where this is going... Good chapter, but in the beginning it said Chapter One, and it's chapter three. Oh well. By the way, that lady DOES sound repulsive. |
| AdamXToby 4ever 2006-09-15 ch 3, | abuseI like the chapter! ^_^ Update soon please. |
| Maddiecake 2006-09-15 ch 3, | abuseWell, she's not a Mary-Sue yet but you kind of sped things up. Your Authors Note was awesome. XD |
| soda'slover 2006-09-01 ch 2, | abuseSo...does Pony likes her or something? Everything she said no to he declined also.Great chapter, update soon please! |