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I'm-Reading
2009-01-02 . chapter 4
I'm very excited about what's going to happen. I'm intrested and I can't wait for more. Is this a magic thing, or not? Keep writing!
amoreRin
2008-10-19 . chapter 4
whoa! nice story! i luv it, i'll wait for the next chapter..i'm curious! xD
Midnight Callwel
2008-02-22 . chapter 4
Please hurry to update.
alayneni
2007-11-17 . chapter 4
Nice to see you've updated. Hope you keep the chapters coming.
anon
2007-11-04 . chapter 4
such a cool chapter! Hope you update soon!
anon
2007-11-04 . chapter 3
A bit short but i still like it
anon
2007-11-04 . chapter 2
Are you going to do a flashback scene? :)
anon
2007-11-04 . chapter 1
Cool! This is going to be like aladdin right?
lili-potter8907
2007-10-29 . chapter 4
oh i like it keep going please. I can't wait to read more. hey was the forsest thing that their parents were meeting to talk about their betrothal?
Alyx
NikkyB
2007-10-28 . chapter 4
AW I LOVE IT! I love the stories were its an arranged marriage or they're betrothed and they're royalty, and harry's this wonderfully sweet guy! Anyways Update soon! I'm really glad your friend convinced you to redue this. I remember reading this before, and then i read it this time and was like aww man this is the person who didn't update in like forever and then i saw the date and clicked back then was like wait a second it says 10-07 and was like OMG so i read chapter 4 and it was perfect. I love it. No flames here
bye bye
n.k
hanvu
2007-10-27 . chapter 4
hey, finally, what took you that long?! i was waiting, hope the next chapter will appear in my inbox soon!
Chelsea Wellhord
2007-10-22 . chapter 4
Aw, that was so good! I'm faving this story! The flashback was really great and the goodbye thing also turned out very emotional, it's clear that you've experienced the same feelings yourself. And thanks for mentioning me, I'm really glad I inspired you to write more! Please, keep up with this story, it's really great and well-written, you have a unique writing style)
BTW, I've been looking for similarities with this and my own WITCH story I've told ablout. It does have some (it's just amazing since none of us have told each other about the plot) but luckily it's not an exact copy so you'll also be interested to read my story, hopefully. I'm going to post it right after I finish "Love is forver". So keep up and update soon, you're great!
truffletruffle01
2007-10-21 . chapter 4
Aw!! That's so cute! I love how Hermione remembers so many more details than Harry does though...^_^

So...I don't mean to sound pushy, but has your inspiration carried on to another (hopefully soon) chapter? *puppy dog eyes*

^__^
Readerfreak10
2007-10-21 . chapter 4
o i luv this chapie
RachelJhoson
2007-10-21 . chapter 3
awesome! cant wait to see what happen
me encanta tu cuento
eres una gran escritora
try to traduce that caligirl!!
kises
rachel.j
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