haha i love it its adorable!

Haha. I love it. UPDATE.

Hmm... Exciting and inviting first chapter! KEEP WRITING!

um... r u gunna update it? u haven't in 4ever so idk

I like it so far...who is he going to help? Hopefully Maddie lol...a guy can imagine everyone else lives in that world cant he lol.

But anyways I really like how you've made everything so...Zack. The disclaimer that he put up was a great touch too lol.

i really like it, i think it will be really good. post more soon!

love it so far! please update!

Ooh this is really good! Update soon!

keep going! it's awesome! lol Bob McBobSkee!

fig,
great! i can't wait for the first chapter...but knowing your little "problem", i'll hold on to my horses...hope to see u soon!
w-squeaky-darthplaigus

I think this story is going to be a
success!I love it already!More soon!

sounds really good! Can't wait to read the rest

Ooh, I likey. It seems interesting. Please continue!

Really nice, really makes the reader want more. SO POST MORE!

this should be good - smiles -