Moremoremore writer-person! Cinward wants to read more!!

I'm sad that you've discontinued it was good while it lasted.

Very, very nicely done. I wish you would continue this, but if you stick with what you said about hiatus in the summary than that probably won't happen... Either way I'm glad I got to read at least this much of such a great fanfic. I love Ed and the way you portray her in this story, so if by some off chance you decide to update new chapters I'll be here to read them ;)

I just want you to know, I love this story. It's very well-written, and Ed just doesn't get enough love in the Bebop fandom. I hope you'll be posting more, but if you don't, I'm glad to've read what I did. Thanks!

when will you update? i'll start threatening your other stories soon.

i knew it would work! yah you listened to me didn't you. i don't even know what anime that other story was from. but thanks for the update. this is good. she should create tomato soon.

when will you update? hurry up!

this is good. very in-character and funny. so update!

/If/ we want it? Are you insane? Of course we want it! -clings- I've fallen in love with a story after only two chapters. Do you know how rare that is for me?

Tackling Ed's story? And so well, too? Wow. I am impressed.

Very nice work. ^_^

Yes, I do want more! Please, keep writing.

Want more!

~GG

I'd like to read the rest of your story! Sounds interesting so far

You cruel, cruel person...

Great story, but what a helluva cliffhanger, no? Please don't leave us hanging too long for the next chapter, okay?

I am greatly amused by this. You have a knack for Ed's voice, which is deceptively hard to write. I'm curious about where you're taking her. Looking forward to more.