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xXcrazyemoXx
2009-11-14 . chapter 12
u captured my attention
this is now my favorite
Love4Lust
2009-11-06 . chapter 12
Each of your stories make me cry
I try so hard not to but they still come unwanted
good job congrats I kinda hoped it was a dream but that's
alright I LOVE how it ended :) it aS confusig at first but now I understand
Kina Kalamari
2009-10-16 . chapter 12
Okay, I'm currently both hating this story and admiring it. I mean, Fang's my favorite character, and you killed him off, after having him betray the flock. I'm mad for that. But I really have to admire the way you did it. The way you wrote it is absolutely amazing. You really have a way with words. I think you should know that the last chapter of this story brought me the closest to crying of any fanfic or book I've ever read, and I've read a lot. I can't say I actually did cry, but I came awfully close.

Anyway, my congratulations on an incredibly moving, well written, extraordinary story, no matter how much I hated what you were doing to Fang.
XxVampRomancexX
2009-09-16 . chapter 12
OK SO I AM WRITING THIS REVIEW IN CAPS! MY MATE TOLD ME ABOUT THIS STORY AND TOLD ME TO READ IT! IT WAS GREAT! GOOD JOB! ADDED TO FAVES!
Mary
2009-08-26 . chapter 12
This was the most beautiful, most emotional fic that I have ever read. I was crying the whole time, and I never cry! You did a fantastic job, and I encourage you to become an author and fill more people with your beautiful stories. I have a feeling that this could help many people get over their losses. I know it helped me. Thank you.
Mindrea
2009-08-07 . chapter 12
Oh my gosh.

That was so incredibly sad. I started crying when Fang died...I pretty much didn't stop.

That was so heartbreaking. I loved it, though. I loved the way you wrote it, the emotion, and the story of Icarus.

A truly great story.

Rae
Mindrea
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
Wow.

That was amazing!

Rae
ilurvePepsi
2009-08-05 . chapter 12
why did you make me cry!this is the best story i have ever read!
Psycho Chick 666
2009-08-03 . chapter 12
omigod i HATE character deaths!
They just make me so sad.
I love how you wrote this, and the songs all fit really well with the chapters, and Fang's death was wrote so brilliantly.

I love the way you didn't have him truly dying, and sorta living on.

I was listening to one of the later songs, A Modern Myth, while reading the epilogue, and I frickin cried again !

great great great work

toodles

/x
Psycho Chick 666
2009-08-03 . chapter 10
omg you actually made me frickin cry...I NEVER CRY ! ! !

nice work, i LOVE this story, but it's just so dang sad !

reading rest now

toodles

/x
wendy
2009-07-22 . chapter 6
me thinks your a good writer
dogwithnonose
2009-01-13 . chapter 12
I was actually crying from chapter 10 onwards! You're an amazing writer. That was absolutely heartbreaking.
mylife9
2009-01-05 . chapter 12
I cried too! the whole part when max and fang/nick visited fang's grave just made me cry. it was so touching but its great because everybody's free now. story was fast paced but still very good. the emotions were amazing.
Imbrd.rlly.brd.
2008-09-24 . chapter 12
OMG i cant believe i started tearing at the end of the story!
anyways ittis great...could have made it longer though...
Darkhottie06
2008-08-09 . chapter 12
My god !! It was so sad !! I cryed a little I think? Wonderful Story !
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