This story is very beautifully written. I hope you'll go back to writing it, its vary good. I totally lost reality while reading it and didn't even notice how many chapters were left, at the end of this chapter I was ready to go on to the next one and noticed that there wasnt on and got very sad.

But dont get me wrong, I totally understand when you get writers block or get bogged down in other things and can't update, I just saw thats its been over a year since you updated and hope you will keep going.

*whimpers*

I havent even actually started reading this yet, but it sounds pretty good and a guy recommended this to me so yeah, sounds pretty good.

however, 'semi-hiatus'? This was last updated in june...*cries* I hope you update soon, and that whatevers taking your time goes...away. Well, good luck with all that, i might review again later, although thats doubtful...lol, zexion is definitely my favorite character; i wonder how you're going to portray him...Just, hope you never discontinue this story!

update... well thanks

Hi! This just continues to get interesting. It's so great to have Sora back to his usual cheerful self. Having him in his Anti-Form was just too creepy. I'm so glad he's back to noraml. I wonder what plans Zexion and the other returned Organiztion member are cooking up now. The same plan of obtaining Kingdom Hearts is still there, but I wonder what Zexion and Lenxion have up they're devious sleeves now. And I wonder why Xemnas wanted to capture Sora in the first place. Surely, as mentioned in the game, Sora would be of more use to them as his usual Keybearer self so in order to use the keyblade and defeat Heartless to make Kingdom Hearts. Anyway, it looks like the events in the Pride Lands are going to be very exciting. And the things with Namine in Twilight Town were quite sweet. I guess everyone needs friends, whether they have a "heart" or not. But isn't this the part where Kairi is supposed to be nearly kidnapped by Axel and appear in Twilight Town. What happened to her? Aw man, I'm rambling again. Anyway, this is getting really interesting and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please continue again real soon. Cya then! ^_^

Nice. Looking forward to some more Org conspiracy stuff and some Pride Land action.

Keep it up.

I like reading stories in which Roxas fails or refuses to fuse with Sora. Like other people have said I like the amount of detail you used. I hope you update again soon! as I can't wait to find out what happens next!

I absolutely love this story. The detail is amazing and I adore how you portray the organization. Can't wait to see what happens in the pride lands!

wow...intense chapter.

great story! 'nuff said =D

Pridelands!? That means DEMYX! 8D Whoot ~

-coughs- Anyway, really liked this chapter, and it's sad to see Roxas and Axel go. Glad Sora /finally/ returned to normal, too XD I can't wait for the next chappie!! 8D Especially 'cause Demy's in it...I just hope nothing bad happens to him... o.o;

Anyway, great chappie as always! (:

~ Lioneh

Hi! Whoa, this chapter sure was action packed. The big fight against Anti-Sora was well decribed. For a while there, I thought he was going to win. But luckily that didn't happen. Roxas helping to get through the good Sora, sure was surprising, considering his fear of meeting the ture Sora and all. But at least Sora's back to his old self again. Yay! Okay, well, he's almost his old self again; y'know considering that Roxas still holds a part of him. In a way, it's kind of sad that Roxas ran away (left) again, instead of sticking around to meet Sora. I can't really understand why he's so afraid to meet with his Other. Being Donald and Goofy and seeing Sora's memories showing what a good person Sora is, he's still thinks that he'll disappear forever if he appraoches Sora. I just don't get it. Nanime said that he'll "disappear and cease to exist if he joins Sora" (or something like that). But Roxas seems to stubbornly think that he'll fade from existance or worse, be destroyed. Someone explain this to me, because I'm am confused. Aw gee, I'm ranting again. Sorry about that. Anyway, oh well, maybe it'll all work out in the end. Roxas will (maybe) come to realize that Sora is really nice and that he won't cease to exist and they can be good friends (in a way). I just hope that because Roxas left, that this whole Anti-Sora thing doesn't happen all over again. And I wonder what's going to happen to Riku. I hope he'll be okay. Well, please continue again real soon. I can't wait to find out where this goes. Cya then! ^_^

wow, took me forever to actually read all this, but I hafta say it was time well spent.

I like the way you actually use all the characters without leaving any out too much, and I think the way you described the fighting, very detailed.

great story, 'm looking forward to the next chapter ^^

It took a few days to catch up, thank you snow days, but I enjoyed reading this a lot. I especially like how you used Sora's anti-form, very cool. The fights are also very well done. Great work I'll keep an eye out for the next update.

Hi! Wow, lots has been happening lately in this story. It was a bit of a shame that Yen Sid, Merlin, and the Fairy God Mother couldn't cure Sora. But I guess that would've been too easy. By the way, you sure got into Donald's short temper thing. If a little bit too much. I mean, I know that he has a bit of a short fuse and can get irritated very easily. But there's such a thing as too much. When they ran into Riku at the Beast's castle sure was funny. Donald and Goofy thinking Riku was a Heartless and jumping on him like that. The fighting at the Beast's Castle was well discribed too; especially the one between Roxas and Axel against Larxene. Roxas and Axel sure make a good team in battle. It's pretty cool. I was kind of worried about the Beast, but he returned to his old self. And then there's Riku still trying to not be overcome by darkness. As long as he remembers his friends he should be fine (like Mickey and Sora). Oh and speaking of Sora, it seems a bit strange to me that Roxas knows so much about how Sora helped people and wouldn't go around doing evil things, but still is afraid to meet/ mention him. Strange that he knows about Sora's heart and memories, and that he still wants to get away with Axel as soon as possible. Surely from this little venture, he's learning that the Sora who attacked him back in Twilight Town wasn't what Sora is truely like. Maybe Roxas should summon up some courage and stick around a bit longer to get to know the real Sora (after they bring him back). It's kind of amazing that he has Sora's memories and is not in the least bit curious to meet him. Oh well. I just had to get that off my chest. Anyway, I hope that they can cure and bring Sora back soon. And I wonder that Zexion is planning. Well, please continue again real soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Cya then! ^_^

Whew. Long chappie @.@; I love all the Organization XI action about the place, and the fight scenes are so well written! Not too detailed about the pain inflicted upon them :3 Otherwise I might not be reading this XD Nah, I can handle stuff like that. Anyways, greatly anticipating the next chappie! And by the way, I'd like to see Demmy get some action soon ;3 Nah, its okay. Take your time. Just...don't, PLEASE DON'T, kill him. ;-; I beg you, I don't wanna have my favourite KH2 charrie...well, fade away again...T^T But I suppose...if it's gotta be done to do the story line properly...but...;-;

OKAY THEN. Great job on this chappie! 83

~ Lioneh the Demyx fangirl xD