OK, so a week or two for chapter 4 was about two years ago...

Would it be too much to hope that after all this time you might continue this?

Aw, are you not going to update anymore? :( That makes me sad since I just found this story - and it's wonderful.

I hope you update soon! I want to find out Kratos's reaction to Lloyd!

Chibi

I have SO many times imagined in my head how Kratos saved them all and now I found a fic of how it may have happened! : D This is so wonderfull and you've done a VERY good job!

Characters are all acting like themselves and I just can't wait for the continueing! Kratos is absolutely my favourite character, so it's so nice when you have written all (almost ;D) in his point of view.

Love the story! I'm really eagerly waiting for the coming chapters, absolutely great job! : D

This is cool, and I hope you continue with it. :D

*adds story to favorites list*

Me like very much

Wonderful story I'm eagerly awaiting the next update _

Sapphire

I have no idea if I reviewed this already or not... if not I'm sorry if I have..well I'm reviewing again! :D lol that was awsm. Yes Sheena... ur soo stubborn! LET HIM SAVE U FOR ONCE! but no. lol ok im done. update when u can!

Oh wow, this is an awesome take on that part of the game! I'm really enjoying it so far :D I have to admit, when I played the game for the first time, I thought them all just conveniently showing up at the end was kind of stupid, but this makes it plausible and *interesting*. So I'm glad you're writing this! I'd add it to my fave list if it wasn't already full.

Wonderful job, and I'll keep an eye out for future chapters!

Oy. Yeah. Um...

WHY DOES ZELOS HAVE TO DIE?

Boo hoo. I've never gotten the Zelos ending... Well, I have, sorta, but not really, ya know?

Ugh, I need to play the game a few more times...

I really liked the way you protrayed Sheena in this chapter (especially the "talk" with Corrine). You wrote her character very well (or, so I think). It's always to read fics with well-written characters.

It also amused me that you made a point of adding in Kratos's random bad habit of not calling anyone (except for Lloyd) by his (or her, in this case) name.

**tries to figure it out** So, why exactly did they fall further into the pit? Kratos can kind of... uh... fly, so I just wondering.

Keep up the good work, and hope to see the next chapter soon.

Shadow of Undine

nice job! i really like the perspective you've chosen and you seem to portray each of the characters really nicely, esp. Kratos... and in this chapter... sheena too! D great chapter... hope to read the next one soon and best of luck with school D!

O.o! Oh my god! They killed Kenny! Wait a sec. . . :P

I thought I wrote a review for you last chapter, but I guess I didn't. Damn! Well, let's cover two parts at once, then.

I'm really enjoying the violence going on. And the traps are wonderful too! Yess. Oh, and your definatly keeping IC. Loven' it!

*slaps a seal of approval on it*

Wow a fic done in Kratos' view. That is so cool!

And so Sheena's saved, but things aren't looking that good, are they?

Next is...Raine? Yes, I believe next is Raine. Let's see what happens.

Good chapter, and keep on going!

Update!_

I await ze next chapter! Awesome job, this should be fun _